James :Do you like your new school ,lucy? Lucy:yes,I really like them !Everyone is very nice.

James:So,what is your favourite subject ?
Lucy :I really like History .I like to learn about plants and animls.
James : Me too.Shall us goto the library after class ? Iwant to buy a book.
Lucy:Sure.I really like the library.He is so big and bright .
James:Yes.There are all kinds of wonderful books there.
Lucy:How does you go home ,James?
James:I go home by foot.
Lucy:Me too.What time do you often go to school ?
James:I often go to school at 7p.m.
哪边有错?帮忙改一下。 学校明天交 谢谢

1. Lucy :I really like History .I like to learn about plants and animls.这两句前后不太一致,可在第二句前加上,Also/Besides表示“此外”。即Besides/Also, I like to learn about plants and animals.
2. James : Me too.Shall us goto the library after class ? Iwant to buy a book. 中的us改为we(作主语用主格);buy改为borrow,图书馆里应是借书,不是买书。
3. Lucy:Sure.I really like the library.He is so big and bright .中的He改为It,指图书馆。
4. Lucy:How does you go home ,James? 中的does改为do
5. James:I go home by foot. by改为on on foot“步行”。
6. James:I often go to school at 7p.m.中p.m改为a.m.(早上)。 pm是“晚上”。
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第1个回答  2012-10-11
them改为it . History改为biology. us改为we.buy改为borrow.He改为 It.does改为do .by改为on本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答  2012-10-11
James:So,what is your favourite subject ?
Lucy :Biology( 生物) .I like to learn about plants and animals.
James : Me too.Shall us go to the library after class ? I want to borrow a book.
Lucy:Sure.I really like the library.It is so big and bright .
James:Yes.There are all kinds of wonderful books there.
Lucy:How do you go home ,James?
James: on foot.
Lucy:Me too.What time do you often go to school ?
James:I often go to school at 7a.m.
第3个回答  2012-10-11
like it
I really like biology
shall we
it is so big
on foot
go to school -> get home
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