跪求如何改正作文，红笔是老师改的，我得把全部在写一次~嗯...不用全对，一点点错就好，好的话加5分~

Question

如题所述

Answer 1

I want to be a writer. there are three reasons why I want to be a writer. Recently, Mo Yan win the Nobel Prize. I really want to win the Nobel Prize. Thus, I want to be a writer.
Secondly, some wirter like Du Fu. I believe one day. I will be a busy man like Du Fu.
Finally, balalababa~~~追问

那个勒...不是被红笔涂掉的不能改...QAQ

追答

...
那只是单词打错而已啊

参考资料：我的大脑

参考资料：我的大脑

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Answer 2

把错的句子改了就行追问

QAQ就是不会改【我英文白痴
还要加一些东西上去，不会啊【哭了

追答

我英语也很差

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