帮我 改一下英语作文，如果有错误的话就写出来 MY HOBBY my hobby is playing computer games and

Question

collecting toys。 I usually plays computer games in the night。The computer games are very fun。 I play the well。 I usually collects toys on Saturday or sunday。 Ihave got some toycars and toyplanes from America。 they are very beautiful。 what are you hobby？
谢谢 那句是I play computer games very well。加我qq吧 1404103567

Answer 1

My hobby is playing computer games and collecting toys. I usually paly computer games at night/in the evening(1). The games are very fantastic/interesting.(2) I am good at it. I also collect toys on Saturday or Sunday. I have had/bought(3) some toycars and toyplanes frome America. They are quite beautiful. What about your hobby(4)?

(1)we usually at night or in the evening. but not at the night
(2)you can't use fun in this situation, because fun is a n. you can use fantastic or interesting or funny
(3)it is better to ues have had or have bought. because got may be a little strange.
(4)it is common to use what about you?or what about your hobby?

Lastly, we don't need to put 's' after I or You or They. We just put 's' after the third perpon singular.

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Answer 2

I Usually at night to play computer games. Computer game is very interesting. I play very good. I usually on a Saturday or Sunday to collect toys. I have some toy cars and toy aircraft from the United States of america. They are very beautiful.what are you hobby？

Answer 3

首先，第一句不正确。从你的表述来看，你的爱好有两个，playing computer games and collecting toys，主语谓语应该保持人称和数的一致，改成：My hobbies are playing computer games and collecting toys。这里有一个现成的例句：My hobbies are letter writing, football, music, photography, and tennis. 我的业余爱好是写信、踢足球、听音乐、玩摄影和打网球。

I usually plays computer games in the night.I 是第一人称，play不用加s，只有第三人称单数才需要加。

I play the well.the是什么意思？

what are you hobby？这里hobby既然是单数，前面的系动词也用单数形式，is就可以了。本回答被提问者和网友采纳

Answer 4

I usually play computer games at night。The computer games are very fun。 I play it well。 I usually collect toys on Saturday or sunday。 I have got some toy cars and toy planes from America。 They are very beautiful。 what is your hobby？