写作思路：避免被动语态，在主动语态中使用动词的句子更容易阅读，因为被动语态在很大程度上使阅读复杂化。最好的句子结构如下：主语、动词和宾语。讲英语的听众习惯了这个句子结构。有时使用被动语态是不可能的，但是你应该尽量减少它。
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Just graduated from our school, in addition to our own work, we have countless possibilities. So if we have a fund, we can start a business and do other things, slash young people and make more choices for our future.
刚毕业出来的我们，除了做我们的本职工作以外，我们还有无数可能。所以如果我们有基金的话，我们可以创业，可以做些其他的事情，斜杠青年，为自己的未来多一点选择。
Just graduated from the University and received the support from our parents, not to satisfy our vanity, but to let us pay more attention in our own field, more time and resources to focus on our future development path.
刚毕业接受父母的资助，不是为了满足我们的虚荣心，而是让我们可以在我们自己的领域里付出更多的精力，更多的时间和资源专注在自己未来的发展道路上。
With these financial aid, we can grow our future faster and get harvest faster. At this time, we can return to our parents and live a good life.
有了这些资助，我们如虎添翼，更快的发展我们的未来，更快的得到收获，这个时候我们可以再来回报父母，让自己过上好日子。
It's good to be ambitious, but workaholic is not advisable, because we have to leave time for ourselves, parents and relatives. Work is for a better life, not for us to get stuck in the work. We get the support from our parents, and we must return it to our parents. Don't take the money and don't earn enough, and don't go home to accompany them. Of course, this is not only the return of your parents' support.
人有上进心是好的，但是工作狂不可取，因为我们还得留时间给自己，给父母，给亲人。工作是为了更好的生活，而不是让我们陷入工作中不能自拔，我们得到父母的资助，一定要回报父母，不要拿钱没挣够，时间不够，而不回家陪父母，当然这不仅仅是父母资助你的回报。
Parents are the relatives of our whole life. They give us unselfish love, so we should be grateful for them all our lives. Parents are the people who want us to be good. We live as if they are happy. If we need help, we can ask our parents for help.
父母是我们这一辈子的亲人，把无私的爱给了我们，所以我们要一辈子感恩父母。父母是最希望我们好的人，我们过得好比他们自己过得好都让他们开心，如果我们需要帮助，我们可以向父母求救。
Because parents are the most willing and sincere people to help us, and we don't have to bear so much, as long as we care more about them in our daily life, and we make ourselves better with their care, it is the best compensation for them.
因为父母是最愿意最真心帮助我们的人，并且我们不用那么有负担，只要在平时的生活中多关心他们，并且在他们的关心下我们让自己过得更好，对他们就是最好的补偿。
We accept the support of our parents, not to gnaw at the old, but to make us do better with their strength, called better ourselves, so that we can have more ability to protect them and the people we love.
我们接受父母的资助，不是啃老，而是借助他们力量让我们做得更好，称为更好的自己，才有更多的能力去守护他们，守护我们所爱的人。