写作思路:事物描写类的作文,已经明确对象是“我的房间”。所以,总体结构可以采取总-分-总的结构模式。开头可以我的房间的总体风格,定个总基调;中间详细描写房间的特色物品,还有自己最喜欢的一样事物,突出重点;最后结尾表达一下对自己房间的感情。这样就比较完整了。时态采取一般现在时。
双语范文参考如下:
My room
My room is simple and warm.
There is a small bed, a table, a bookshelf and a wardrobe in my room. It's simple, isn't it? But there are many lovely toys on the bed. There are teddy bears, Mickey Mouse, dolls and so on. My favorite is bookshelf. There are all kinds of books on the shelf. They are all my favorite books.
Looking at these lovely dolls and wonderful books, I can have beautiful dreams every night. I love my room.
我的房间
我的房间简单而温馨。
我的房间里有一张小床,一张桌子,一个书架和一个衣橱。很简单,是吧?但是床上有很多可爱的玩具。有泰迪熊,米老鼠,洋娃娃等。我最喜欢的是书架。书架上有各种各样的书。它们都是我最喜欢的书。
看着这些可爱的娃娃还有美妙的书,我每天晚上都能做美美的梦。我爱我的房间。
写作模板参考
My room
My room is ...........
There is .................. in my room. ............But there are many ........... My favorite is ............They are all my favorite...........
........................ I love my room.
我的房间
我的房间........
我的房间里有...........................但是.有很多........我最喜欢的是........是我最喜欢......。
....................我爱我的房间。
My room范文:
My secret base is my room, because there are a lot of things inside. Like a doll, with things before, my work, drawings, etc., are all treasures in my room. During the day, I don't allow other people to come in, I was the only in no one else in there, in the evening, can sleep with mother come in with me, other people still don't come in. To be honest, I really like a secret room base!
However, every day in a boring room. I sometimes let others into my room, but only sometimes, not often, so want to enter my room after I agree, is allowed to enter! My aunt is my favorite, so I often let my aunt into my room, she would tell me she's secret, I will tell her my secret, we often play games in the room!
My secret base like a free heaven, I don't have homework, when I was in the room reading, painting figure, in the evening I sleep in a bed sheet, just like sleeping on a cloud!
Sometimes I cry, I will come to the room. Into the room, the sun brought me happiness, and, more importantly, the shining sunshine, let my heart, forever free to fly in the sky.
中文翻译:
我的秘密基地是我的房间,因为里面有很多东西。像是娃娃、以前用过的东西、我的作品、图画等,都是我房间里的宝物。白天时,我不让其它人进来,只有我在里面没有别人在里面,晚上时,跟我睡在一起妈妈能进来,其它人还是不能进来。说实在,我的房间真的像一个秘密基地哩! 不过,天天都在房间真无趣。我有时也会让别人进入我的房间,但只是有时,不是常常,所以要进入我的房间要经我的同意,才可以进入喔! 我最喜欢我的姑姑,所以我就常常让我的姑姑进我的房间,她会跟我说她的秘密,我也会跟她说我的秘密,我们也常常在房间里玩游戏喔! 我的秘密基地简直像一个自由天堂,我没有功课时,我就在房间里看看书、画画图,晚上我睡在被单上时,简直像睡在云上一样哩! 我有时哭的时候,我会到房间里。一进房间,太阳光给我带来了快乐,更重要的是,那闪亮亮的阳光,让我的心,永远的在空中自由自在的飞翔。