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题目：description of the most impressive place that you have been to

Answer 1

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Summer vacation, my mother took me to Jiuzhaigou to play. Where the scenery beautiful, charming scenery, picturesque. It is not only beautiful, but also cool. There are four major scenic spots, there are colorful pool, waterfall, forest, and mountain. These four sites I most like xuefeng.
There is great fun. Can play snowball, snowman. And I also like the cool, so these four sites I most like xuefeng.
Wu Caichi there is very beautiful. Heard here is the land of idyllic beauty -- the gods lived. I carefully looked at, the colorful pool are respectively five different colors: red, yellow, blue, purple, and green. Wu Caichi a riot of colours of the shape can be more, some like a gourd, and some like the dishes, like sharp scythe. Wu Caichi a riot of colours of the water Keqing, mom and I went away and unable to part from.
Then, we came to the curtain waterfall. The pure white waterfall, drop from the clouds, like 10 million white horses do many things at once, go forward with great strength and vigour to run down, like an old woman's hair a fall down, like a white cloth hanging in the mountains of stone. The falls drop water voice, like a little girl playing the music, nice.
Finally, we came to the woods strongly fragrant. There are many strains of banyan tree on both sides, there is a big mountain, seem to enter a "bird of paradise."
Four major attractions beautiful inside Jiuzhaigou really have a well-deserved reputation!
翻译
放暑假了，妈妈带我到九寨沟游玩。那里风景优美，景色迷人，山青水秀。那不但美丽，而且凉爽。那里有四大景点，有五彩池、瀑布、树海和雪峰。这四大景点我最喜欢雪峰。
那里非常好玩。可以打雪球，堆雪人等等。而且我又喜欢凉快，所以这四大景点之中我最喜欢雪峰。
五彩池那里非常美丽。听说这里是神仙住过的地方——世外桃源。我认真地看了看，那五彩池分别有五种不同的颜色：有红的、黄的、蓝的、紫的，还有绿的。五彩缤纷的五彩池的形状可多了，有的像葫芦、有的像盘子、还有的像锋利的大镰刀。五彩缤纷的五彩池的水可清了，我和妈妈恋恋不舍地走了。
随后，我们来到帘帘飞瀑。那纯白色的瀑布，从天而降，好像千万匹白色战马齐头并进，浩浩荡荡地飞奔下来，又像一位老婆婆的头发一条一条地掉下来，还像一条白布挂在山间的石头上。那瀑布掉下来的水声音，像是一位小姑娘弹的乐曲，好听极了。
最后，我们来到郁郁苍苍的树海。树海的两边有很多株榕树，中间有一座大大的山，好象进入了“鸟的天堂。”
美丽的九寨沟里面的四大景点真是名不虚传啊！
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Answer 2

the most impressive place that you have been to

　　There are many advertisement on T.V. They try to give you a strong impression on the idea, object, service, etc. This can be done by designing the best ad. you have ever seen or the worst. as long as you can remember the designer has done their job.

      Thinking back on all the ads I have ever seen, I guess the bost impressive one has to be an channel ad. The advertisement was trying to give me a good impression on a specific channel, in this case, channel 2. All the goods from this ad came down to this, it had a very catchy tune making me sing it all the time, simple but effective title (all 2gether) and interesting graphics (bright and colourful). The plot was simple, a wave of happiness going through everybody, making people laugh and be joyful even in their dreams.This implys that channel 2 would bring happiness to you.

       In conclusion, I thought that the channel 2 advertisement was definitely one of the most impressive advertisements I have ever seen, and I would like to see more ads just as excellent on T.V, instead of boring ones wasting my time interrupting my favourite T.V show! There are many trips in my memory,Among them,I never forgot that day when my family made a trip to visit YanDang Mountain in May 1st 2005.It was a fine day that day,when we arrived at the peak of YanDang Mountain,I was charmed by the beautiful landscape and I felt that I was flying in the sky.It gave me the most impressive is not only the charmful landscape attract me,but also my mother and father could spend time making a trip with me although they were always busy. I never forget that day and that trip to YanDang Mountain with my whole family.

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