英语翻译。。请求好心人帮忙翻译！

Question

由于本人工作想要调岗，需要一份英语书面材料，特请求好心人能够利用您宝贵的时间帮忙翻译下！！万分感谢！！
《此内容关系着本人的工作前途，请好心人不要使用翻译软件之类的工具，希望能有个标准的英语，完整的语法和连贯性，若您觉得我的申请内容有何不妥需要修改或添加的，也请麻烦能帮帮忙修改或添加！！！再次感谢！！》

内容是：
调职申请书
老板：您好
不知不觉我已经到公司两个多月了，我很庆幸自己能有此机会来此工作，同时也很荣幸能成为这个团队中的一员，期间我学到了很多，感受到了很多，
我也深深地感谢您和公司对我的培养，
但是，您从我的简历也应该知道，我毕业于四川烹饪高等专科学校这知名烹饪学府，在大学花费了三年时间去学习我的专业西餐制作工艺和餐厅管理，同时我在西餐厅和酒店也有着两年的丰富工作经验，对于西餐各式菜肴的制作都能熟练操作，并且能利用我所学习的餐厅管理知识去帮助餐厅更好地经营，我热爱我的专业，热爱餐厅的工作环境，虽然我在现在这儿一切都很开心顺利，但我希望自己有个更长远的发展，我希望能将自己过去长久以来所学的知识和工作经验能得以所用，因此我希望能有机会调到餐厅去工作，这样不仅能更好地发挥我的价值，同时也能更好地为公司创造经济效益。
同时，我来新加坡的目的除了工作学习，还有就是希望能赚钱去供给我的妹妹和弟弟上大学，由于我的家庭情况比较贫穷，家中却有三个孩子，而如今，弟弟妹妹今年都上大学了，家庭的经济已无法承担，我作为长子，我有义务尽自己最大的努力去帮助我的弟弟妹妹上大学，因此我选择来了新加坡，本以为可以赚取到足够的钱去帮助我的弟弟妹妹
但真正来到这儿，却发现工资无法解决目前的现状，通过现在在我们公司餐厅工作的朋友得知，餐厅的工资和加班比中央厨房的多，能赚取更多的钱，
出于经济上的考虑，我也希望公司能将我调到餐厅去，更好地为我的家庭减轻负担，帮助我弟弟妹妹能顺利上大学，交学费。
如果我能调至餐厅，对于我个人而言，我能更好地发挥自己的能力，对于我的家庭和弟弟妹妹而言，我能赚取更多钱更好地帮助他们，对于公司而言，我能利用我的
兴趣爱好，专业知识和工作经验去为公司创造更好的经济效益。一举三得！
因此，我在此真诚地恳请老板您能答应我的请求，如果真能如愿，我一定更加努力工作，不辜负您的期望。谢谢！

Answer 1

本人精心翻译。你的原申请表情感很足，但是条理不够清晰。我对原文做了一定的修改，让二点理由更加清晰，能让老板一眼看出让你调职的好处。

我是新加坡管理大学（三所新加坡政府大学之一）的学生，如需帮助可以给我发邮件[email protected]

Transfer applications

Dear XXX(老板名字)

Time has gone fast, and unconsciously I have work here for more than two months. I am not only glad to have this opportunity to work in the company, but also very proud of being a member of this team. During the working period, I learned a lot and experienced a lot. I am deeply grateful to you and the company for my personal development.

However, I am eager to transfer my work to the restaurant department. Here are the reasons for my application.

Firstly, I graduated from College of the famous Sichuan cuisine culinary institution. I have spent three years in college to learn my professional Western production techniques and restaurant management. I also have two years of working experience in restaurant and hotel which make me own a high level of skill in the production of Western dishes. I can use the knowledge that I learn from the restaurant management expertise to help the restaurant to better management. I love my profession and love the restaurant's work environment. Although I am happy with everything here, I still hope to have a longer term development. I wish that my knowledge and work experience can be used, so I expect to have the opportunity to transfer to the restaurant so that I can show not only my own value, but also create better economic benefits for the company.

Secondly, my purpose of working in Singapore is not only for myself, but for my family. I have a poor family with three children. As the firstborn son of the family, I think it is my duty to afford my younger sister and brother's tuition fee for university education. Therefore, I hope to earn a bit more salary to support my family.

Above all, if I managed to transfer to the new department, I can show my talent better. To my family, they can live in a better life. To the company, it can earn more profits. According to all these reasons, I sincerely ask your permission of my request. If you approved my application, I would work harder to reach your expectation.

Best regards,
XXX(你的名字)

Answer 2

很长啊。
LS的翻译有些错误
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Dear Sir or Madam,

unwittingly,I have been working in your company the company for more than two months. I am glad to have this opportunity. I am also very proud to be a member of this team,which let me learned a lot and had a lot of thoughts. I appriciate all the trainings that given by you and your company.
However, you must have known from my resume,I graduated from Sichuan Cooking Institution, which is a well-knowned institution for trainning highly skilled cooking specialists.I spent three years in this institution to complete my study of professional western cooking skills and restaurant management. Moreover, I also have two-year experiences of working in western cuisine resaurant. I am very expericenced in cooking different western style dishes,and helping the managements to run the restaurant better by using the management knowledge I studied at the institution. I love my job and the working enviroment. I am very happy about everything now, although, I do hope that I can have a better opportunity in the long-term.
困了，明天来给你继续翻译。我只想说，我可能翻译的并不怎么好，但楼上那个翻译的实在是........

Answer 3

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Boss: Hello
I have unconsciously the company more than two months, I am glad to have this opportunity to own this work, but also very proud to be a member of this team, during which I learned a lot and feel a lot,
I am also deeply grateful to you and the company of my training,
However, you from my resume should also be aware, I graduated from College of the famous Sichuan cuisine culinary institution, spent three years in college to learn my professional Western production techniques and restaurant management, while my restaurant and hotel also have two years of working experience, for the production of Western dishes can be all kinds of skilled operations, and can use what I learn from the restaurant management expertise to help the restaurant to better management, I love my profession, love the restaurant's work environment , although I am happy now everything is smooth here, but I hope they have a longer-term development, I hope to have learned his past long-standing knowledge and work experience can be used, so I hope to have the opportunity to be redeployed restaurant to go to work, so I better play not only the value, but also to create better economic benefits for the company.
At the same time, I came to Singapore, the objective was to work and study, there is hope that the supply of money to go to my sister and brother in college, because my family are quite poor, there are three children at home, but now, brothers and sisters are on this year's University, and the family economy can not afford, I, as eldest son, I have a duty to do their utmost to help my brothers and sisters to college, so I chose to come to Singapore, this I thought I could earn enough money to help me brother sister
But what really came here, they found that wages will not resolve the situation, by now in our friends who work for that company's restaurant, restaurants, wages and overtime work, more than the central kitchen, can earn more money,
Out of economic considerations, and I hope the company can go to restaurants I transferred to better reduce the burden for my family, brothers and sisters to help me smooth college and pay tuition.
If I can transferred to restaurants, for me personally, I can better play to their abilities, for my family and brothers and sisters, I could earn more money and better help them, for companies , I can use my
Hobbies, professional knowledge and work experience to the company to create a better economic benefits. Threefold!
Therefore, I sincerely ask the boss promised me you can request, if really fulfill our wishes, I will work harder to live up to your expectations. Thanks! 可以吧~~~~~~

Answer 4

Transfer applications
Boss: Hello
I have unconsciously the company more than two months, I am glad to have this opportunity to own this work, but also very proud to be a member of this team, during which I learned a lot and feel a lot,
I am also deeply grateful to you and the company of my training,
However, you from my resume should also be aware, I graduated from College of the famous Sichuan cuisine culinary institution, spent three years in college to learn my professional Western production techniques and restaurant management, while my restaurant and hotel also have two years of working experience, for the production of Western dishes can be all kinds of skilled operations, and can use what I learn from the restaurant management expertise to help the restaurant to better management, I love my profession, love the restaurant's work environment , although I am happy now everything is smooth here, but I hope he has a more long-term development,
I hope to have learned his past long-standing knowledge and work experience can be used, so I hope to have the opportunity to be redeployed to work in restaurants, so I better play not only the value, but also better for the company to create economic benefits.
At the same time, I came to Singapore, the objective was to work and study, there is hope that the supply of money to go to my sister and brother in college, because my family are quite poor, there are three children at home, but now, brothers and sisters are on this year's University, and the family economy can not afford, I, as eldest son, I have a duty to do their utmost to help my brothers and sisters to college, so I chose to come to Singapore, this I thought I could earn enough money to help me brother sister
But what really came here, they found that wages will not resolve the situation, by now in our friends who work for that company's restaurant, restaurants, wages and overtime work, more than the central kitchen, can earn more money,
Out of economic considerations, and I hope the company can go to restaurants I transferred to better reduce the burden for my family, brothers and sisters to help me smooth the university and pay tuition.
If I can transferred to restaurants, for me personally, I can better play to their abilities, for my family and brothers and sisters, I could earn more money and better help them, for companies , I can use my
Hobbies, professional knowledge and work experience to the company to create a better economic benefits. Threefold!
Therefore, I sincerely ask the boss promised me you can request, if really fulfill our wishes, I will work harder to live up to your expectations. Thanks!

Answer 5

Transfer applications
Boss: Hello
I have unconsciously the company more than two months, I am glad to have this opportunity to own this work, but also very proud to be a member of this team, during which I learned a lot and feel a lot,
I am also deeply grateful to you and the company of my training,
However, you from my resume should also be aware, I graduated from College of the famous Sichuan cuisine culinary institution, spent three years in college to learn my professional Western production techniques and restaurant management, while my restaurant and hotel also have two years of working experience, for the production of Western dishes can be all kinds of skilled operations, and can use what I learn from the restaurant management expertise to help the restaurant to better management, I love my profession, love the restaurant's work environment , although I am happy now everything is smooth here, but I hope he has a more long-term development,
I hope to have learned his past long-standing knowledge and work experience can be used, so I hope to have the opportunity to be redeployed to work in restaurants, so I better play not only the value, but also better for the company to create economic benefits.
At the same time, I came to Singapore, the objective was to work and study, there is hope that the supply of money to go to my sister and brother in college, because my family are quite poor, there are three children at home, but now, brothers and sisters are on this year's University, and the family economy can not afford, I, as eldest son, I have a duty to do their utmost to help my brothers and sisters to college, so I chose to come to Singapore, this I thought I could earn enough money to help me brother sister
But what really came here, they found that wages will not resolve the situation, by now in our friends who work for that company's restaurant, restaurants, wages and overtime work, more than the central kitchen, can earn more money,
Out of economic considerations, and I hope the company can go to restaurants I transferred to better reduce the burden for my family, brothers and sisters to help me smooth college and pay tuition.
If I can transferred to restaurants, for me personally, I can better play to their abilities, for my family and brothers and sisters, I could earn more money and better help them, for companies , I can use my
Hobbies, professional knowledge and work experience to the company to create a better economic benefits. Threefold!
Therefore, I sincerely ask the boss promised me you can request, if really fulfill our wishes, I will work harder to live up to your expectations. Thanks!