英语改错

Question

每个句子都有错~

1. George is doing a MSc in civil engineering.
2. I would be grateful if you would send it to the address above-mentioned.
3. People think he resigned on his own accord.
4. To tell you the truth, I can’t accept people who think about money all the time.
5. I started to learn English with the aim to become a teacher.
6. Everybody should be given the chance to reach their aims.
7. It is not allowed to talk in the library.
8. A child learns a lot by doing things alone.
9. Rollo Martins was a very good writer and he was not famous.
3应该是把on该成of吧？
我觉得4，5，7 ，8，都很有问题。

Answer 1

1. George is doing a MSc in civil engineering.
==>MSc前应该用an,因为首字母M的发音是[em]，为元音开头。

2. I would be grateful if you would send it to the address above-mentioned.
==>would send应该是sent。
虚拟语气从句用过去时态。

3. People think he resigned on his own accord.
==>think改为thought。
宾语从句主从句要时态一致，除非是叙述历史事实或真理。

4. To tell you the truth, I can’t accept people who think about money all the time.
==>去掉To tell you the truth中的you。
习语，直接是to tell the truth。

5. I started to learn English with the aim to become a teacher.
==>with改为for。
搭配：learn sth. for...

6. Everybody should be given the chance to reach their aims.
==>their改为its。或Everybody改为All。
前后单复数不一致。

7. It is not allowed to talk in the library.
==>the改为a。
所有地方的图书馆都不可以讲话，要泛指，而非特指。
(有点鸡蛋里面挑骨头？)

8. A child learns a lot by doing things alone.
==>by改为from。
搭配：learn...from...

9. Rollo Martins was a very good writer and he was not famous.
==>and改为but。
前后意思有转折，应该用连词but。

Answer 2

1. George is doing a MSc in civil engineering.
改：George is doing an MSc in civil engineering.

2. I would be grateful if you would send it to the address above-mentioned.
改：I will be grateful if you would send it to the address mentioned above.

3. People think he resigned on his own accord.
改:People think that he resigned on his own accord.

4. To tell you the truth, I can’t accept people who think about money all the time.
这句话挺好的 语法上我不觉得有什么毛病。

5. I started to learn English with the aim to become a teacher.
改：I started to learn English with AN aim to become a teacher.
"AN aim" 为之准确

6. Everybody should be given the chance to reach their aims.
diction用的不当
改: Everybody should be given the chance to reach their goals.

7. It is not allowed to talk in the library.
(语法上okay)

8. A child learns a lot by doing things alone.
(okay!)

9. Rollo Martins was a very good writer and he was not famous.
改：Rollo Martins was a very good writer BUT he was not famous.