来英语大侠看看这句怎么翻译

当我爬上楼梯来到教室时,我听到身后传来很大的声音。是我的英语老师叫我的名字。
1、When climing stairs to the classroom i heard a loud noise coming from behind。It`s was my E.T calling my name.
2、I hear loudly speaking when i climb the stairs comed to classroom in back。It`s that E.T call me name.
这两句有错吗,有错在不破坏句子本意下请帮忙指出并改正,并猜猜哪句是老师写的,嘿嘿

第一句表达正确,而且用了高档结构:状语从句中的省略,用动词-ing形式。这应该是老师所写。只是,你给的形式有敲打失误:It was,不是所呈现出的那样。
第二句则有失误,可以修改为:
2、 When I climbed up the stairs and came to the classroom, I heard a loud voice from behindIt was my E.T who called me name.
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第1个回答  2014-07-09
1有点小错误,是老师写的吧,后面是it was,不是It`s was

2错的有点多。。
时态heard,climbed
翻译为声音,loudly speaking 是指说话声
非谓语用错,comed改为coming
in back用的很奇怪,还是behind好
后面还是It was,我认为最好改成It was my E.T who was calling my name
第2个回答  2014-07-09
第一句是老师写的,第二句有错。
可改为 I heard someone speaking loudly from behind when I was climing the stairs。it was ET calling my name
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