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题目:儿童节前夕的班会上大家对于国产动画片和国外动画片进行了热烈的讨论,大家各抒己见,分别讨论了他们的优点和缺点.请根据下面得内容提示,用英语写一篇短文.

优点 缺点
国产 1.注重教育性,教育儿童帮助\尊重别人, 1.过于理想化
动画 做一个诚实勇敢得人. 2.缺乏想象力
2.儿童可以从中学到知识. 3.情节简单

国外 1.以现实为基础,产年人也喜欢. 1.有的涉及暴力和性
动画 2.儿童能从中学会处理现实生活中 2.被视为文化侵略.
必须面对的问题.

要求:1.不要逐条翻译,可以适当的增加内容.
2.词数:100词左右
3.开头已给出,但不计入总词数.
参考词汇:侵略invasion

开头:We had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages and home-made cartoon films and foreign ones.

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Answer 1

We had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages and home-made cartoon films and foreign ones.
First, we summed up the advantages of Chinese-made cartoons: focus on education, education to help children to respect others, do an honest and courageous people.首先，我们总结了国产卡通片的优点：注重教育性,教育儿童帮助，尊重别人，做一个诚实勇敢的人。
Secondly, children can learn a lot of knowledge.
其次，儿童可以从中学到许多知识。
However, there are also some Chinese-made cartoons deficiencies.
但是，国产动画片也有一些不足之处。
For example: too idealistic, the lack of imagination, a simple plot ... ...
例如：过于理想化，缺乏想象力，情节简单……
Then, we summed up the advantages of foreign cartoons and weaknesses.
然后，我们又总结了国外卡通片的优点与缺点。
The advantages of foreign cartoon films are: 1. To the reality-based, like the elderly.
国外卡通片的优点有：1.以现实为基础,老年人也喜欢.
2. Children can learn to deal with real life issues to be faced.
2.儿童能从中学会处理现实生活中必须面对的问题.
However, there are several foreign animated shortcomings.
但是，国外动画片也有几处缺点。
Foreign cartoons will not only involved in some violence and sexual, and some are even seen as cultural invasion.
国外动画片不但有的涉及暴力和性，有的甚至被视为文化侵略
This is the domestic and foreign cartoons, as well as the characteristics of the difference between animation.
这就是国内卡通片和国外动画片的区别以及特点。

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Answer 2

We had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of the home-made cartoon films and foreign ones. Here present the opinions.
The home made cartoon films win our hearts for the reason that they concentrate on teaching children how to help and respect others as well as to be a brave guy, which is more educational than the foreign ones. At the same time, children can learn a lot of knowledge from them. However, there still exists problems such as being to ideal, lacking imagination and plots being to childish.
As to the foreign cartoon films, most students have the opinion that they are good at focusing on reality so that not only children love them but many adults love them likewise. Based on that, many children can learn how to deal with problems to be faced in reality, which shows the practical aspect the foreign ones. But obviously, some foreign ones contain some violent and dirty scenes which are improper for children. Some people also regard them as culture invasion because they cooled our love for home made ones.
Above are the opinions of our discussion.

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Answer 3

We had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages and home-made cartoon films and foreign ones.
Home-made cartoon films are famous for their educational story,this teach children helping and respecting others,and improve them to be a brave person.Besides,children will learn a lot of knowledges form the cartoon.However,these cartoon films are too ideal and are always lack of imagination,this make home-made cartoon films empty.
foreign cartoon films are in an opposite ways.The stories are often based on the true life.And children are able to learn how to solute problems in their lives.But every coin has two sides.Some foreign cartoon films have improper plots and sometimes we see it as aggression of culture.
IN my opinion,we should treat them in an oboject attitude.We need to combine their strongpoints so that we will get all the benefits.

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