帮忙修改一下英语作文

Question

My day
Today is Friday. Is’s winday .I get up very early, because I didn’t finish my homewoke last night.I go to school at seven o’clock.I piay football in the school with my friends.Then,we have a math class.I have a lunch at home.Inthe afternoon,I have a Chinese class.I go home at five o’clock.I go to bed at nine o’clock.this is my day.

Answer 1

修改如下：

My day
Today is Friday. Is’s winday【应该是it is
windy， 如果你的意思是“天气：有风”】 .I get【got，一般日记是用过去时写的】 up very early, because I didn’t finish【had not finished，过去的过去使用过去完成时】 my homewoke last night.I go【went】 to school at seven o’clock.I piay【played】 football in the school【at school，这是“在学校里”这个意思的固定搭配】 with my friends.Then,we have【had】 a【去掉a，一般课程不需要加“a”】 math class.I have【had】 a【去掉a，have lunch是固定搭配，表示“吃午餐”】 lunch at home. In the afternoon,I have【had】 a 【去掉a，一般课程不需要加“a”】 Chinese class.I go【went】 home at five o’clock.I go【went】 to bed at nine o’clock.this is my day.

Answer 2

Today is Friday. It is windy/Wednesday.I got up very early,because I didn’t finish my homework last night.I went to school at seven o’clock after breakfast.In the morning,we had a math class.I had lunch at home.In the afternoon,I had a Chinese class.I played football with my friends after school.I went home at five o’clock.I went to bed at nine o’clock.This is my day.

Answer 3

Today is Friday. Is’s windy .I got up very early, because I didn’t finish my homewoke last night.I went to school at seven o’clock.I played football in the school with my friends.Then,we have a math class.I had my lunch at home. In the afternoon,I had a Chinese class.I went back home at five o’clock.I went to bed at nine o’clock.this is my day.