求大神编一篇英语作文

开头是
Dear xxx
I miss you very much,I want to tell you about my family...

结尾是
best wishes XXX

考察的是过去进行时和一般过去时的灵活运用..

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Dear xxx
i miss you very much, i want to tell you about my family.
something interesting happened yesterday.when i was still sleeping in the morning, there was a sound once in a while outside my window . I got up to see what was there.It was a poor bird with a broken leg. I went to call on my mom and dad. my mom was cooking breakfast and my dad was reading newspaper. they came to see what happened.After a discussion,we all decided to keep the bird and look after it until it got better. we even have a name for it"Birdy".so there is a new member in our family now.
what about you?is there anything interesting you can tell me?
best wishes xxx
亲爱的xxx
我很想你 我想告诉你我们家(的一些事)。
昨天我们家发生了一件事。早上我正睡觉,窗外老是时不时传来一声响动。我起来看看是怎么个回事。原来是一只推骨折了的小鸟。我去叫爸妈。我妈在做早饭,我爸在读报纸。他们来了,大家讨论了一下,决定收留他,照顾他直到他好一点。我们还给它起了名“伯蒂”。现在我们家有了一个新成员。
你呢?有什么好玩的事告诉我吗?
祝一切都好 xxx
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第1个回答  2014-04-26
考过去式的运用?
我觉得这篇应该写一般时态的吧,就是陈述事实的作文啊~
Dear xxx(自己想写谁就写谁):
I miss you very much,I want to tell you something about my family.
I have a big and happy family.There are five people in my family:my parents my elder brother,sister and I.We were living in Australia in the past.But two years ago,we came to my favorite county,China and lived there.
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呃,我写不下去了,用过去式实在不知道怎么写,我想你可以就写家庭中过去发生的某件事应该就可以了吧。本回答被网友采纳
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