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Question

不要机器翻译 !!。 来了我也不给分的。还有 别翻译成中国式英语阿。

亲爱的科比 我是一名来自中国的女生。
首先恭喜你获得了第四枚总冠军戒指。
之前我也有写一封信给你 不知道你看到了没有 。没收到也没关系拉。
我会坚持的! 今年夏天 你来到了中国 我很近距离的看到了你。
那种激动 不知道怎么形容，只是让我更加有写信的冲动了 。
也许你见过更多比我们更疯狂的球迷，也许我们的支持很渺小。
不过 只要让你能感受到在中国有我们这一群支持着你的人就好 。
再次恭喜你获得总冠军! 希望你明年能得到属于自己的第五个总冠军。

Answer 1

DATE:
Dear Mr.Bryant,
I'm your hysterical girl fan from China.Here,first of all, please allow me to extend my honest congratulations to you on the feat of achieving the 4th NBA championship ring in your carrier. Before,I've written you a letter.Even though you don't recieved it, I would be cheerful still and continue to write to you in the future.
Also,I feel honoured to have a chance to have seen you in a close distance on the occasion of your visit to China this summer. The excitement was beyond word so as to make me extremely compulsive to write this letter to you.
Maybe you've experienced lots of fans much more crazy than us,and maybe to you the support from us seems tiny, while as long as you could feel us, a group of people that will stand by your side all the time, that will be OK.
Congratulations once more on your winning the championship and hope you to achieve the 5th championship in the coming season.
yours,
XXX
楼主，凭心而论，我之前几位的回答真的不敢恭维，不要说语意上的准确，单是文法错误就成篇累牍，真的已经无法看下去了。 我是英语专业的，也许在您看来，我有些口冷，但这是事实。我不是为了排挤竞争者，争夺积分才出此言，而是想到如果KOBE BRYANT先生真的收到了那样的信，真的会哭笑不得。如果您对我的话有怀疑，您尽可找专业人士，一眼便可辨明。
我写下的这篇是经过本人仔细考虑的，文体书面正式，在理解您语意的基础上转化成英文，力求达意。望楼主采纳，谢谢

Answer 2

亲爱的科比 我是一名来自中国的女生。
首先恭喜你获得了第四枚总冠军戒指。
之前我也有写一封信给你 不知道你看到了没有 。没收到也没关系拉。
我会坚持的! 今年夏天 你来到了中国 我很近距离的看到了你。
那种激动 不知道怎么形容，只是让我更加有写信的冲动了 。
也许你见过更多比我们更疯狂的球迷，也许我们的支持很渺小。
不过 只要让你能感受到在中国有我们这一群支持着你的人就好 。
再次恭喜你获得总冠军! 希望你明年能得到属于自己Bryant Dear I am a girl from China.
Congratulations first of all, you get a fourth championship ring.
Before I have to write a letter to you do not know that you did not see. I have not received it does not matter la.
I will insist on it! This summer you came to China I am very close to see you.
The kind of emotion do not know how to describe, but let me write more of the impulse.
Perhaps you have seen more than us fans crazy, maybe we have very little support.
However, as long as you can feel in China, we support this group of people like you.
Congratulations once again to obtain the overall champion! Hope that you will be next year, the fifth of their own championship.

Answer 3

Dear Kobe Bryant,
I am a girl from China. First of all, I want to congratulate you on the winning of the fourth championship ring. I had written a letter to you before. Now I wonder whether you have received it or not. And it doesn't matter if you haven't.
I will insist on it. You came to China this summer and I saw you at close quarters. I don't know how to describe the excitement at that moment. And it only gives me the impulse to write to you. Perhaps you have seen a lot more fans who are crazier than us. Maybe our support is very insignificant. But we'll be happy as long as you perceive that there are a group of supporters of you in China.
Congratulations to you once again for becoming the NBA World Champion. We sincerely wish that you will be the fifth world champion the next year.

每句话的意思没有丝毫改变，只是个别字翻成英文后就不通顺了，因此稍有改动。还有，你中间冒出一句：“我会坚持的！”具体什么意思？

Answer 4

希望你学好英语，自己写出来的哪怕不好也才能表达自己的心意。自己热诚的感受要自己去表达。加油！

Dear Kobe.Bean.Bryant:
I am a girl from China. First I'd like to congratulate you on your getting your fourth championship ring.I have written a letter to you before,but I don't know if you have received it. It doesn't matter. I will insist on writing to you.
This summer, when you came to China and I saw you very close. Words can't describe how excited I were at that time, but it let me much more eger to write to you. Maybe you have met many crazier fans, maybe my support is so tiny. However, I just want you to know that in China you have us who will stand on your side and back you forever.That is enough.
At last congratulate you once more. Hope that you can get your fifth championship ring next year.
Yours your honest fans

Answer 5

Dear Bryant :
I am a girl from China.
Congratulations first of all, you get a fourth championship ring.
Before I have to write a letter to you do not know that you did not see. I have not received it does not matter la.
I will insist on it! This summer you came to China I am very close to see you.
The kind of emotion do not know how to describe, but let me write more of the impulse.
Perhaps you have seen more than us fans crazy, maybe we have very little support.
However, as long as you can feel in China, we support this group of people like you.
Congratulations once again to obtain the overall champion! Hope that you will be next year, the fifth of their own championship.