第一句有些别扭。
Hello, everyone, I am happy to be stand here today. It's the first we communicate in English. As you know, I am a travel enthusiast, I love travelling very much. I will share some of my trip.
During this summer holiday, I went to the Northest first. I have vistied many places like Mohe, Manzhouli, etc. After that I travelled to Xinjiang. (下面的句子比较乱，稍微改了一下）It's very hot there, quite different from the weather that in the Northest. But for me, no matter it's cold or warm, it has its own beauty.
I love all these trips very much. Hope you will enjoy too.
Thank you.
Hello, everyone, I am happy to be stand here today. It's the first we communicate in English. As you know, I am a travel enthusiast, I love travelling very much. I will share some of my trip.
During this summer holiday, I went to the Northest first. I have vistied many places like Mohe, Manzhouli, etc. After that I travelled to Xinjiang. (下面的句子比较乱，稍微改了一下）It's very hot there, quite different from the weather that in the Northest. But for me, no matter it's cold or warm, it has its own beauty.
I love all these trips very much. Hope you will enjoy too.
Thank you.
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第1个回答 2015-08-13
不懂追问我。
第2个回答 2015-08-13
有的，开头有些奇怪
第3个回答 2015-08-13
应该问你们英语老师
第4个回答 2015-08-13
单词问题算吗？
第5个回答 2015-08-13
有的
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