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摘要：这次由美国次贷危机引发的全球范围的金融海啸，被喻为是自1932年经济大萧条以来最严重的金融危机。席卷全球的金融海啸已经严重威胁到我国的制造业和外向型企业，尤其是中小企业。面对来势凶猛的危机，中国广大中小企业如何在金融海啸中求存保命，以免被金融巨浪卷走，值得深思。目前经济形式，裁员减薪是最直接和有效的途径，但不是唯一的途径。中国的中小企业要想在机
中寻求发展。首先应该是提高自己的品牌竞争力注重开源节流和完善企业流程降低内耗，提高生产力进而通过转型、并购，或完全退出市场或行业来缓解金融海啸的冲击。本文将通过对我国中小企业发展现状进行分析，从外部环境和行业内部环境两个角度探讨我国中小企业在经济发展中存在的问题，并对我国中小企业发展前景进行分析，了解政府在应对经济危机中对中小企业出台的一系列发展政策，明确我国中小企业在发展的战略决策。最后针对我国中小企业在经济萧条阶段发展存在的问题，提出相应的发展对策。
上面是汉语，请帮助修改我的翻译
Abstract: The global financial tsunami caused by the U.S. sub-prime crisis has been called the worst one since the Great Depression of the financial crisis. The financial tsunami sweeping the globe has been a serious threat to our country's manufacturing and export-oriented enterprises, especially for the SMEs.In the face of ferocious crisis, how can the majority of small and medium enterprises of China survived from the financial tsunami, to avoid being swept away by the financial turbulence, it is worth pondering. Based on the current economic form, cutting down the numbers of persons employed or the salary are the most direct and effective way, but not the only way.
In order to develop during this financial crisis ,China`s SMEs should improve the competitiveness of their brands focus on income and reduce expenditure and improve the business processes to reduce friction and increase productivity through the transformation of further mergers and acquisitions, or completely withdraw from the market or industry to mitigate the impact of the financial tsunami. My article will analysis the development of SMEs through the current status of China, from the external environment and internal environment sectors .So as to doscuss their issues during the economic development .I will help you to analysis and understand the Government in responding to economic crisis promulgated a series of SME development policies, a clear development strategy of China's SMEs in the decision-making. Finally for the SMEs in the depression phase of development of China's problems, propose appropriate approach to development.

Answer 1

楼主前半部分翻译得很好，怎么后半节像软件翻译？

1.第一句最好变为The global financial tsunami caused by the U.S. sub-prime crisis is called the worst financial crisis since the Great Depression in 1932. “被称作”是一般现在时，……以来主要是说后面的金融危机。不是只要有since，就要用完成时态。

2. SME是英文Small and medium enterprises的缩写，已经是复数了。所以不需要加s，下文同样。

3.裁员减薪 表达为 cut staff and reduce salary 更简洁清晰。
4. In order to develop during this financial crisis, China`s SME should improve the competitiveness of their brands, focus on income and reduce expenditure, improve the business processes to reduce friction, increase productivity through the transformation of further mergers and acquisitions, or completely withdraw from the market or industry to mitigate the impact of the financial tsunami.
标点符号不太清晰，容易造成阅读困难。 开源节流中把focus on 改为increase更好。内耗加个internal friction更好。

5. This paper will analyze the current status of the development of Chinese SME and discuss their problems in the economic development from two aspects of external internal environment.
analysis是名词，analyze才是动词。下文相同。
“通过”好像在汉语中就多余。During换成in更符合文意。Sector指部分时一般是（活动领域的）部门; （尤指）经济领域。

6. 并对我国中小企业发展前景进行分析，了解政府在应对经济危机中对中小企业出台的一系列发展政策，明确我国中小企业在发展的战略决策。
I will help you to analyze and understand a series of development policies promulgated for the SME by the government in response to the economic crisis and the strategies and decisions of Chinese SME in the development process.

7. 最后针对我国中小企业在经济萧条阶段发展存在的问题，提出相应的发展对策。
Finally this paper also provides the corresponding development strategies to the problems existing in the depression phase of the development of Chinese SME.

Answer 2

Abstract: The U.S. sub-prime crisis triggered by the global financial tsunami has been called since 1932, the worst since the Great Depression of the financial crisis. The financial tsunami sweeping the globe has been a serious threat to our country's manufacturing and export-oriented enterprises, especially SMEs. The face of ferocious crisis, China's how the majority of small and medium enterprises survive the financial tsunami, life insurance, to avoid being swept away by the financial turbulence, it is worth pondering. The current economic form, layoffs and pay cuts are the most direct and effective way, but not the only way. China's SMEs succeed in machine

In seeking to develop. Should first of all is to improve the competitiveness of their brands focus on income and reduce expenditure and improve the business processes to reduce friction and increase productivity through further restructuring, mergers and acquisitions, or completely withdraw from the market or industry to mitigate the impact of the financial tsunami. This will be the development of SMEs through the analysis of the status of China, from the external environment and internal environment sectors are two perspectives of SMEs in the economic development of China's problems, and prospects of China's SME development, analysis, understanding of the Government in responding to economic crisis promulgated a series of SME development policies, a clear development strategy of China's SMEs in the decision-making. Finally for the SMEs in the depression phase of development of China's problems, propose appropriate approach to development.

Answer 3

The U.S. sub-prime crisis triggered by the global financial tsunami has been called since 1932, the worst since the Great Depression of the financial crisis. The financial tsunami sweeping the globe has been a serious threat to our country's manufacturing and export-oriented enterprises, especially SMEs. The face of ferocious crisis, China's how the majority of small and medium enterprises survive the financial tsunami, life insurance, to avoid being swept away by the financial turbulence, it is worth pondering. The current economic form, layoffs and pay cuts are the most direct and effective way, but not the only way. China's SMEs succeed in machine
In seeking to develop. Should first of all is to improve the competitiveness of their brands focus on income and reduce expenditure and improve the business processes to reduce friction and increase productivity through further restructuring, mergers and acquisitions, or completely withdraw from the market or industry to mitigate the impact of the financial tsunami. This will be the development of SMEs through the analysis of the status of China, from the external environment and internal environment sectors are two perspectives of SMEs in the economic development of China's problems, and prospects of China's SME development, analysis, understanding of the Government in responding to economic crisis promulgated a series of SME development policies, a clear development strategy of China's SMEs in the decision-making.
Finally for the SMEs in the depression phase of development of China's problems, propose appropriate approach to development.

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Answer 5

我们发现在壶中放入适当茶量是品偿各种茶的关键因素。每个标示代表从1到3的茶的浓度范围。
茶的浓度范围也代表了一个2品托（6杯）的茶壶要放多少茶匙的茶量。