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假如你是Henry，朋友Sally请你明天和她去听音乐会，但你不能去。下面是你明天的活动日程表，请根据提示，适当发挥，写一篇邮件回复她.morning：babysit my sister，clean the house；afternoon：go to the hospital，wash my clothes；evening：help my parents，do some reading
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推荐答案 2009-08-27

亲爱的Sally：
很抱歉明天不能和你去听音乐会，因为我明天会有很多事情要做。
明天早上，我要照顾我的妹妹，并且打扫屋子。中午，我要去一次医院，还要洗衣服。晚上我要帮助我的父母做饭和打扫卫生。还要做一些功课。实在是很忙。
实在很对不起。希望你能谅解。

Dear Sally:
I was sorry very much tomorrow cannot listen to the concert with you, because I will have many matters to tomorrow do.
In the morning, I must look after my younger sister tomorrow, and cleans the room. Noon, I must go to one time the hospital, but must do laundry. Evening I must help my parents to prepare food and to do the cleaning. Must do some schoolworks. Is very busy really.
I'm sorry very much really. Hoped that you can forgive.

Yours
Henry

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第1个回答 2009-08-28

我帮楼主分析下吧，呵呵。
ziying，回答比较有条理，但语法错误不少，如i was sorry, cleans应该是clean等，且文笔一般。
苏_嘉木，标点符号打得让人晕头转向，纯粹只是连接楼主给的几个短语，逻辑性不强。
最好的要属乐者乐石写的，推荐楼主选用。叙事清楚，有说服力，且言简意赅。但有几处小错误，“who was too young”中的was应为is， "go to hospital "应为“go to the hospital ”，没有the的话表示去看病，而不是后面所解释的去探病。“need to some help to my parents”可能是漏了一个do吧，但我觉得这句可以直接写成need to help my parents on some stuff,因为do sth结构用的太多了不好。最后一个“and last”是不对的，可改成“，at last”，或直接将“and last i should also”改成“and”。

第2个回答 2009-09-09

Hey Sally,

Sorry I cannot make it because of my tight schedule for tomorrow. Just let you know, tomorrow morning, I have to babysit my sister at home, and then i need to clean the house because my parents will be outside for work. Latter that afternoon, I have to go to hospital since I have set up an appointment with the doctor. After that I will go back home to wash my clothes. And in the evening, I feel strongly obliged to help my parents to prepare for the dinner. And I think you might notice, usually i will do some reading at night for the next day's class.

Have a nice day,

Sincerely

Henry

第3个回答 2009-08-28

Dear Sally,
Thanks for inviting me to the concert.But I'm extremely sorry to tell you that I can't go to it.I have something important to do tomorrow.In the morning I have to babysit my sister and clean the house.In the afternoon I must wash my clothes and then go to hospital.And I must do some reading and help my parents in the evening.Sally,I know the concert is very interesting and you would like me to go with you,but I really can't spare the time.Next Sunday I'll be free,how about going to a film?

Yours sincerely
Henry

第4个回答 2009-08-27

dear sally:

i'm sorry that i can't go to the concert with you.Because i should do a lot of things on tomorrow.in the morning.i will babysit my sister.and clean the house.in the afternoon,i will go to the hospital,then wash my clothes after that.
In the evening. i'll help my parents.and do some reading.
i'll really busy on tomorrow.sorry
see you next time.ok?

yours
Henry

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