求高手帮忙修改一下作文，改的词汇和用法稍微高级一点，从句多一点！不要超过200字！急！！！

Question

题目：On Four Factors that Constitute Wisdom
What is the wisdom? This is an ever-lasting topic, everyone has his own different understanding for wisdom, just as Bertrand Russell thinks that there are four factors that contribute to wisdom.
Here we are talking about the four factors, of these the first is a sense of propotion, the capacity to take account of all the important factors in a problem and to attach to each its due weight. From my point of view that wisdom is not only the skills to solve problems but also knowledge of selection. The next factor is emancipation from personal prejudice and wisdom should stay away from personal prejudice but keep independent existence. The last factor is that we should to be in-personal and as a result, wisdom in this sense can be educated and the teaching of it should be one of the aims of education. With every increase of knowledge and skill, wisdom becomes more necessary.
Wisdom is an important factor in pursuit of the success of the people as well as the infinite power of social development. Wisdom is acquired from the inner world, the more familiar are you with your inner world, the more satisfactory you will be.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

The definition of wisdom is an every-lasting topic. Everybody has his or her own opinion. For Bertrand Russell, there are four main factors of wisdom. First of all, wisdom is measured by a person's capability of evaluating all aspects of a problem and ranging them according to their importance. Next factor of wisdom, in my opinion, does not lie in the skills of solving problems but the skills of making selections. Additionally, the third element of wisdom is the ability of making judgment without any prejudice. It is crucial for people to stay objective when making decisions. Finally, wisdom should be adaptive to all people without exception. It is exactly what we are expecting from our education that everybody can be educated. The pursuit of wisdom is getting increasingly essential as we are gaining more knowledge and skills. We are expecting to acquire wisdom in order to become successful. The society also needs people's wisdom to operate properly and develop rapidly. Wisdom gives you the insight into yourself and the essence of things around you. As you are getting more understanding of yourself, you will become more satisfied and peaceful.
感觉需要改的比较多，直接重写了。