急求初二英语写作:国庆假日就要到了,你打算去北京旅游。你将游览故宫(the Palace Museum)、天安门(Tian'

急求初二英语写作:国庆假日就要到了,你打算去北京旅游。你将游览故宫(the Palace Museum)、天安门(Tian'an Men Square)、颐和园(the Summer Palace)和长城(the Great Wall),晚上漫步北京街头,品尝北京烤鸭(the Beijing roast duck)…参考以上提示,以My vacation plans为题写一篇70词左右的短文,告诉你的度假计划。

  Vacation plan.
  The National holiday is coming. It make me execited. I 'm

  planning to take a no-stress vacation. I will go to Beijing on

  vacation with my parents on vacation. That must be a wonderful

  travel. I'm going to visit the Palace Museum and Tian'an Square .I

  think they are all great and beautiful! Then we're visiting the

  Summer Palace . How nice it is! We will go to visit the Great Wall at

  the last. What a beautiful building with long history it is! In the evening,we

  will take for a walk in the street of Beijing. I'm going to eat the

  Beijing roast duck . It 's so delicious . They are my favourite!
  At my dreaming time,I hope to go to Beijing soon. I can't wait!

  本文 采用 一般将来时 写法,主要形式有: be going to do sth, be doing sth ,will do sth
  结合感叹句用法:
  How + 形容词 +名词 +谓语+其它!
  What + 形容词 + 名词词组(a + 名词)+ 谓语!

  本文大意:
  国庆节假期就要来临了,这让我感到很是兴奋。我不久计划过一个 完全没有压力 的假期。我将和我父母去北京度假,那绝对是一次奇妙的旅行。 我将参观故宫和天安门广场,我认为它们很是雄伟、美丽!然后我们将游赏颐和园,它是多么漂亮啊!最后,我们将去参观万里长城,它是一个拥有悠久历史的多么美丽的建筑呐! 到了晚上,我们将会在北京的街道上游玩散步,我将会吃北京烤鸭,它们是我的最爱!
  在我幻想的同时,我希望我能快点到北京去, 我已经迫不及待了!

  (原创、原创、原创、支持原创,反对盗版- -!)

  呵呵,花费了九牛二虎之力 终于完成了内- -!
  同学,我也是初二的,不过我觉得你作文的内容跟我初一时的有点相似,可能是我们的课本都不一样吧.......

  本文只供参考哦,可能文章的单词多了点,不过伱可以 仿照古人 “去其糟粕 取其精华”,我都是一句句对应的饿。

  本文纯属独创,可能文中会有稍微错误之处,但绝对符合伱的文意!

  当然,我也希望你采纳,毕竟这是无分的提问,满意后能加点分更没问题内- - 如果还不被你采纳的话,只能说,伱的要求太高了,而且伱也没有要求的权利额!

  好了,打完后,接下来----睡觉咯。
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第1个回答  2010-09-25
I have been to BeiJing for a travel. it was a great journey! we have went to see the Imperial Palace and the great wall and them let me feel that I was proud to be a Chinese.
the Imperial Palace noted the history. there were many antiques which we could espy the great culture .
from the great wall,it was a well-known wonder in the world.it is made of big stones which was too heavy to bring even uesing it to buil a construction( n. 建筑, 建筑物) of ruggedization. what a great grandeur.
我去过北京旅游。这是一个伟大的旅程!我们去看故宫和长城,他们让我觉得我是一个中国人而感到自豪。
故宫.有许多古董,我们可以在里面了解伟大中国的文化
长城,它是一个著名的奇迹,由许多很重的石块构成,是一个伟大的奇迹。
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第2个回答  2010-09-30
Today is National Day,all of my family plan to visit Beijing.We think we will visit the Great Wall,that is very famous.It is one
of the longest places in the world.Then we will visit the Palace Museum,Tian'an Men Square and the Summer until night.At night,we will eat the Beijing roast duck in the restaurant in Beijing.At last,I think we will walk on the steet and take some photos.Beijing is very beautiful~~~
第3个回答  2010-10-03
你几班的!??!和我们的卷子一样!!整好 我们也在写这篇书面表达!!
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