很简单的初中英语翻译。帮个忙！

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汉译英：
嗨，我的名字是DAVE，我是一名大学生，这是我的一天。
我通常在早上7点准时起床，然后花10分钟的时间洗脸刷牙，接着看看新闻一直到7：40，我们7：50开始上早自习，我习惯在自习的时候学习英语。然后，8：30我们开始今天的第一节课，中午12：00，我们下课了，接着我就去吃午饭。吃完午饭往往在12：30以前，然后，我会上一上网，听一听音乐，接着小睡一会。1：30是我们的第5节课，直到5：00我们才下课。下课后我们去吃完饭，接着就是令人激动的夜晚，在大学，每个晚上都会有不同的活动等待着你的参与，不过大多数时候我都呆在宿舍上网。晚上11：00，我就会上床睡觉。这就是我的一天。

Answer 1

Hi,I am Dave,a college student and now I will describe for you a typical day of mine.
Usually I get up at 7 o'clock sharp and spend 10 mins washing my face and brushing my teeth.Then I watch TV news till twenty to eight.I begin my morning self studing with others at ten to eight and I usually choose to study English.At half past eight,we begin our first class and finish all four morning classes at twelve and have lunch.Usually I can finish my lunch before half past twelve,then surf on the Internet, listen to music and take a nap.At half past thirteen,we begin our fifth class and finish all afternoon classes at seventeen.Then we go for dinner and embrace our exciting evening.At college,all kinds of activities are ready for you but I prefer to surf on Internet at dormitory in most cases.At twenty three,I go to bed.See! Let us call it a day.
需要解释的是 准时 这里不要译为on time,最后的一句 译为我那样 比较合适。

Answer 2

Hi, my name is DAVE, I am a college student, this is my day.
I usually get up at 7 am, and then spend 10 minutes to wash up, and then read the news until 7:40, we start on the early-morning study at 7:50, I used to learn English in individual study class. Then at 8:30 we start the first lesson, 12:00 noon, we have class off, and then I go to lunch. Often I have my lunch before 12:30, then, I would get online, listen to music, then a nap. 1:30 is our 5th lesson until 5:00 we go to recess. After school we go to dinner, followed by an exciting night. At the university, each night there will have different activities waiting for you participation, but most of the time I stay in the dorm surf the net. At 11:00 pm, I'll go to bed. This is my day.

Answer 3

Hello, my name is Dave,i am a university student,this is a day for me.
I always wake up at 7 in time, then i spend 10 minutes to wash the face and brush the teeth, then look at the news until 7:40, we begin to study at 7:50, i like to study English when it is individual study.Our lessons begin at 8:30 to 12:00.After class, i go to have a lunch and it usually befor 12:30. Then i would like search the internnet, listen to music and have a snap. Our fifth lesson begin at 13:30 and we finish class at 17:00. After class, we have a meal and then it is the excited evening. In the university,you can enjoy different activities every night, but i almost stay at the bedroom to get online.I go to bed at 23:00. This is my one day.

Answer 4

similar to that My Name Is Dave, I was a college student, it was my day. The usual in early July, I must point to bed, it has spent 10 minutes in the face of a brush teeth, a new look to see that has been to 7: 40, I was 7: 50 since the beginning, study, I study used in the study of the waiting time learning English... , 8: 30 we begin the first lesson today, at noon 12:00 we after school, then I will go for lunch. often eat lunch in 12:30, then I will be on the Internet and listen to music, and then sleep. 1: 30 is 5 classes until 5: 00 we classes. After class, we have to eat rice, then there was an exciting at night, at the university, every night, waiting for a different activities of your participation, but most of the time I stayed in the quarters on the Internet. evening 11:00, I will go to bed. This is my day.

Answer 5

有点长耶！

Answer 6

这也太长了