帮忙修改一篇初二的英语作文，诚心诚意100分献上！

Question

This is an interesting weekend.I tey to keep a big dog.I like playing with it.I should help it take the shower.It finish taking the shower.It's clean.Then I decide to go to mountains with it.I need to look after it.We leave for home.Mabe it's tried and thirsty it need lie down and rest and drink water.
这篇作文的要求是①like doing②should③try to do sth.④be good for⑤want （sb.）to do sth.⑥finish⑦decide⑧need
还有一篇：
This is an interesting weekend.I with my parents went to the restrant eat dinner.I'm hangry.T like eating a lot of meat."You should try to eat less meat.It's good for your healthy"My sister said.But I'm very thirsty.I went to supermarket brought some drink.
After dinner,we went home.I finished my homework.Then I decided to do some exercise.I'm so tired.I'm need lie down and rest.
这两篇哪一个好修改就修改哪个吧，要是不好修改就在写一篇行吗？100分献上
（初二的英语作文）
要是写的不好那就再帮忙写一篇好吗？

Answer 1

Every weekend is fun for me. I have a big dog, Bob. I like playing with him. (英语中狗用人称代词he或her，而且都有一个人一样的名字) I usually give him a shower over the weekend because I want the dog to be clean. As soon as I finishing washing him, I take him out for a walk. If the weather is good, I will take Bob out to the mountains. We leave for the mountains as soon as he gets dry. When both of us are tired, we will go home with the dog waling ahead of me. Walking is good both for me and my dog. I decided that we all need to stay healthy. So walking my dog is always fun. I love my dog.

你写的真不错呢，有一些小毛病，坚持写，你会进步很快的。

第二篇：
Last weekend was fun. I went out for dinner with my parents. But I was not happy with the food. Usually I eat a lot of meat, and I know it is not good for our health. "You should try to eat less meat. It's good for your health," my sister told me. I knew she was right. I got very thirsty, so I went to supermarket and brought some water.

After dinner, we went home. I finished my homework. Then I decided to do some exercise. I was so tired after the workout. I needed to lie down and go to bed so I could get up early the next morning.
这篇写的也不错，比上一篇有进步

Answer 2

An Interesting Weekend
I had an interesting weekend.My parents and I went to the restaurant for dinner last weekend.We wanted many dishes,such as fish,meat,chicken and some vegetables.I like eating meat,so I ate a lot of meat that day.My father said,“You should eat more vegetables.They are good for you.Besides,you need more exercises.You're getting fatter.”“I know,Dad, and I try not to eat meat.But very time I fail.Dad,I decide to listen to your advice.But I want you to help me.Could you please wake me up every morning?”“All right。”Said father.We finished our dinner soon,then we went home.

给你修改，已经很通顺，没语病了。祝你进步

Answer 3

help sb. to do sth.
It 属第三人称单数，动词要用es
clean的形容词为 clear
…………
这两篇作文都感觉很中国化，语序非常的中文格式。。。而且时态不是很准确吧！

What an interesting weeked it was!!( What+a/an+形容词+可数名词单数+主语+谓语！)I like eating something delicious.(like doing)
I went to the restrant with my parents for lunch/super.
I was so hungry.
I wanted to eat a lot of meat.(want sb.to do)
"You shouldn't eat so much meat.It's not good for your health"my mother said.
After dinner,we decided to go to the market.
I tried to buy something to drink.I thinked I need a healthy body.

Answer 4

This is an weekend. I went to the restrant with my parents for dinner.For I was very hangery and like eating meat very much,so I try to eat more meat ,although my mother was saying that I should eat little meat ,it was good for my health.
After we finished our dinner,I nearly need my parents to help me walk .I felt unwell with my full stomach .And at that time ,I decided not to eat like that forever.