你能给我看看你的新书吗？ Can you give to me see your new book

Question

你能给我看看你的新书吗？
Can you give to me see your new book?
可以这样写吗

Answer 1

Would you let me take a look at your new book?
Can I take a peek at your new book?
口语环境下，new text可以替代new book，对下方依然适用
以上是在好奇并且想简单看看的情况下的用法
如果是想要借对方的书来阅读的话，建议使用以下说法:
Could you lend me your new book?
Do you mind if I read your new book?
其实这样的话有很多种说法，以上是简单举例，希望能帮到你

Answer 2

可以啊

Answer 3

你那样写不合适的哦~
would you please let me see your new book?

Answer 4

could I look(或者你想说read) your new book?