英语作文改错。

Question

My favorite band is The Cranberries. That is great band from Ireland. I love groups that play different kinds of music. Sometimes, they play music that's loud and energetic. But sometimes, they play music that is quiet and gentle. Their songs are very amazing. 那奇特的嗓音和动听的旋律把我吸引住了。 I think their songs make us feel happy and relaxed,makes us full of energy and full of hope about the future.

这是我写的一篇作文。我经常在语法上犯错误，所以帮忙改正文中错误，还有帮忙翻译那句中文，万分感谢

Answer 1

改正后：
My favorite band is The Cranberries， they are a great band from Ireland. I love groups that play different kinds of music. Sometimes, they play music that's loud and energetic and sometimes, they play music that is quiet and gentle.Their songs are very amazing,the unique voices and the beautiful melody deeply interested me. I think their songs make us feel happy and relaxed,makes us full of energy and full of hope about the future.
注：我用的是美式语法

Answer 2

that is a great band
i love the group which play
play music which is loud and
but other times
which is quiet and gentle
the fantastic voice and fair-sounding rhythm attract me so much
make us full of energy and full of hope for the future