求各位学长学姐帮我看一下译文哪里有错误或者不合理的地方，明天我就要参加面试了。今年初三毕业。下面的译文是请人翻译的，我害怕有错误。面试的时候有外教。
还请大家帮忙！
原文：位老师你们好 ，我叫曹佳瑜 。可以这样来记我的名字，曹操加上周瑜，但是我一直深信它寓意着我会比这两位英雄人物有更深的智慧和更成功的人生。
我来自昆山，今年16岁。今天来本校面试，虽然不知道结果究竟会怎样，但是我坚持会把自己最自信、最成功的一面表现出来，相信这会是我宝贵的一次经验。
我是一个爱好很广泛的女孩，特别是对于艺术方面，不论是绘画或是唱歌我有着浓浓的兴趣。但是从这也能看出我是一个很没有耐心的人，因为我拿手的很多，但是却都不精细，所以这是我要努力克服的很大一个问题。我还喜欢旅游，我喜欢那种背上行囊游遍四海的感觉，确切说我是追求那种自由的感觉。静下心来的时候我还喜欢听着歌，写一些文字，虽然没有那么的精彩，但能抒发我内心最真实的感受，我认为那是如至宝一样珍贵的文字。
忘了说，我最大的爱好就是笑，我觉得没有笑容的生活的灰暗的 ，我一直用笑容鼓励着我自己前行，也尽力带给我身边的朋友快乐，希望老师们看到我的笑容也能够有花儿般愉悦绽放的心情！
谢谢 ，我的介绍完了 。
译文：
Taechers you.my name is Cao Jiayu.Can do to remember my name, together with Zhou Yu Cao Cao, but I always believe it is the implied meaning of my heroes than these two have a deeper wisdom and more successful life.
I come from Kunshan, 16 years old. School today to interview, although do not know exactly to what would happen, but I will insist on their most confident, most successful aspect of the performance, I believe that this will be my precious of an experience.
I am a very broad-loving girl, especially for the arts, whether painting or singing and I have a deep interest. But this can also see I am a very impatient person, as many of my good, but not fine, so this is great I want to strive to overcome a problem.I also like traveling, I like the back of luggage that traveled around the globe, feeling that I was seeking exactly that feeling of freedom. Stop and when I also like listening to songs, write some text, although not as exciting, but it can express the feelings of my heart the most, I think that is the same as treasure the precious words.
Forgot to say my biggest hobby is laughing, I do not think the lives of grim smile, and I always encourage me with a smile on their front line, and also try to bring a friend next to me happy, I hope teachers see my smile can have flowers bloom as pleasant mood!
Thank you, I finished the introduction.