第1个回答 2009-02-27
As we all know,the general revision before the entrance exam to college is approaching.Everybody in the class and the teachers as well are quite busy with the lessons now.We really want to know the teachers' woring plan for the general revision.Meanwhile,we wish that the teachers will have an ear on what we ,the students are thinking about.I think we'd better sit down to discuss about the coming general revision.Personally I think,there are several points that I have to mention so that we can have a friutful revision. First of all, we'd better slow down the pace of the teaching in order to get
a good result on the general revision.Secondly,since it is our first time to take part in such kind of exam,we are short of experience and short of methods as well.We hope that teachers will give us some effective methodds.Finally,you know everybody is facing great pressure before the exam.So,I wish that teachers will give us much more encouragement.
第2个回答 2009-02-27
Dear Miss Yang,(假设老师姓杨，这里的标点符号要用逗号)
In view of the day for our entrance examination to colledge is approching, you kindly asked us for our opinions in how to increase the efficiency of our english study during these days.鉴于高考日子将近，在这段备考期间，您让我们对如何提高英语学习，都说说各自自己的看法。
(此句为上面网友Lemmenqi的好句子)Personally I think,there are several points that I would like to mention so that we can have a friutful revision. First of all, it is advicable(这里用we'd better的语气太硬，再说这里是跟老师说话) that we slow down the pace in learning, but memorising and practising more instead. Secondly, since it is our first time to take part in such kind of exam,we are lack of experience and methods, we hope that you would give us some effective methodds. Finally, as you know, we are all facing great pressure during this period, so it is greatful that you give us much more encouragement.
Sincerely yours,（用Yours sincerely也对）
Zhang hua(切忌考试时勿用自己的真实姓名)
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