英语高手请指点，急！

Question

我要参加英语比赛，第一项是1分钟自荐，第二项是2分钟演讲
下面是我的自荐稿：Self Introduction
Ladies and gentlemen,
I am very happy to get such a chance to take part in such an exciting contest.
My name is Zhang Liang, a graduate of Nanjing No.6 Mid-school. I used to be the chairman of our students' union, the monitor of my class and the 团支书 of our league.
I was awarded 江苏省大中学生社会活动积极分子，江苏省德育标兵and I was assessed as Three good student of Jiangsu Province twice.
I like music, painting and sports and I enjoy doing some outings. Well, I am here to get some experience and to gain some confidence, not for the prize. I hope all of you can like me.
1.请帮助翻译文中的中文。
2.请帮忙修改
3.请问演讲有什么需要注意的问题
谢谢
注意一下：我问的是翻译一下文中的中文单词不是翻译全文为英文哦！谢谢

Answer 1

女士们先生们：
我非常高兴能有这样的一次机会来做这样一次激动人心的比赛。我叫张亮，是南京第六中学的毕业生。我过去曾经是我们学校学生会的主席、我们班的班长以及团队的团支书。
我被授予江苏省大中学生社会活动积极分子，江苏省德育标兵等称号，而且被两次评为江苏省的三好学生。
我喜欢音乐，画画和体育运动。而且我喜欢外出。我今天来参加比赛并不是为了得奖，而是为了获得一些经验来增强自己的自信心。我希望大家都会喜欢我。

注意演讲时的表情，而且语速尽量慢点，毕竟要让大家能停得清楚。

Answer 2

女士们、先生们：
很高兴有机会参加如此令人兴奋的比赛.我的名字是Zhang Liang,毕业于南京市第六中学. 我曾经担任学生会主席、班长和团志书；被授予江苏省学生社会活动积极分子，江苏省德育标兵，而且两次被评为省三好学生.我喜欢音乐、绘画、体育和一些户外活动. 我参加这次比赛的目的是获取经验和增强信心,而不是获奖.希望大家喜欢我.

团志书：league branch secretary
大中学生tertiary and secondary school student
社会活动积极分子social activist
德育标兵moral pacesetters(not sure)

posture and eye contact are important in speech contest

Answer 3

修改如下
Ladies and gentlemen,
My name is Zhang Liang, I am very happy to have a chance to take part in such an exciting contest. please allow me to introduce myself .
i'm a graduate from Nanjing No.6 Mid-school. I used to be the chairman of our students' union, the monitor of my class and the league branch secretary of our league.
I was awarded 江苏省大中学生社会活动积极分子，江苏省德育标兵and assessed as Three good student of Jiangsu Province twice.
I love music, painting , sports and I also enjoy doing some outings. I am here to get some experience and to show my confidence, I hope all of you can enjoying my performance