请大家帮我看看怎样翻译这段文字

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麻烦大家帮我看看，我能看的大概其的翻译了，可能也翻译的不对。大家帮忙看看，谢谢。
I met Rachel at a party and we fell right into a close connection.
我在一个聚会上认识了Rachel，在进一步的接触中我们相互感觉很好。
At the end of the evening, while discussing possible New Year’s Eve
plans, 在深夜，我们正在讨论新年的前夜计划的时候
Rachel confessed she may not be up to going out. She explained, “For the past 2 years, I’ve been having fun with cancer.” （这句不会翻译）
For the 2 years before that, I’d been volunteering one day a week in a 28 bed hospice ward as part of my spiritual practice. 两年前，我在一家有28个床位的收容所做志愿者，（后半句不会）
I knew at once how serious Rachel’s illness was, and I was sensitive to my own urge to run. 我立刻知道了Rachel的病是多么严重，（后半句不会）But we really liked each other, and fell in love.但是我们真的相互喜欢，并坠入了爱河。
Many of my friends were dubious of my taking on the hard work and heartache obviously ahead. 我的一些朋友（不会）But when they got to know Rachel, they loved her too, and supported us loyally throughout the last year and a half of Rachel’s life.但是他们认识Rachel后他们也爱上了她，并且忠诚的支持我们一年半。
During the first several months of our relationship, Rachel underwent radiation for the third recurrence of cancer. 在我们相处的几个月里，Reachel因为癌症第三次发作接受了化疗。We functioned well as patient and caregiver because we’d both had practice! This radical difference in our roles didn’t hamper our relationship, though, because my time with the hospice had taught me to see the essential person inside the illness, and not to be afraid in the presence of suffering.（后面不知该怎么翻译了）

Answer 1

Rachel confessed she may not be up to going out. She explained, “For the past 2 years, I’ve been having fun with cancer.”
Rachel坦诚她大概不会出去渡假。她解释道：“在过去的两年中，我一直在与癌症作斗争”
For the 2 years before that, I’d been volunteering one day a week in a 28 bed hospice ward as part of my spiritual practice
在那之前的两年中，我一直在一家有28个床位的济贫院里做义工，以此作为我精神生活的一部分
I knew at once how serious Rachel’s illness was, and I was sensitive to my own urge to run.
我立刻意识到Rachel得病有多么严重，我敏感的意识到自己有一种想要逃跑的念头
Many of my friends were dubious of my taking on the hard work and heartache obviously ahead.
我的许多朋友多对我选择承担如此艰难的感情并面对将来可以预见的悲剧的做法表示怀疑
We functioned well as patient and caregiver because we’d both had practice! This radical difference in our roles didn’t hamper our relationship, though, because my time with the hospice had taught me to see the essential person inside the illness, and not to be afraid in the presence of suffering
付出了耐心与关爱，我们一直相处的很好。因为我们都曾有过做义工的经验！ 然而化疗丝毫没有影响我们的感情，因为我在济贫院度过的时光教会我去关注病痛之外这个人的本质，不畏惧眼前的痛苦。

Answer 2

Rachel confessed she may not be up to going out. She explained, “For the past 2 years, I’ve been having fun with cancer.”
Rachel供认，她可能无法达到走出去。她解释说： “在过去的2年，我一直在与癌症的乐趣。 ”
For the 2 years before that, I’d been volunteering one day a week in a 28 bed hospice ward as part of my spiritual practice.
为二年，在此之前，我想是志愿一天一个星期在28床安宁病房的一部分，我的精神的做法。
knew at once how serious Rachel’s illness was, and I was sensitive to my own urge to run. But we really liked each other, and fell in love.
知道如何一次严重的雷切尔的病，我是我自己的敏感敦促运行。但是，我们真的很喜欢对方，并坠入爱河。
Many of my friends were dubious of my taking on the hard work and heartache obviously ahead. But when they got to know Rachel, they loved her too, and supported us loyally throughout the last year and a half of Rachel’s life.
我的许多朋友都怀疑我考虑的辛勤工作和心痛明显提前。但当他们结识瑞秋，他们爱她，并在全国各地支持我们的忠实的过去一年半的瑞秋的生命。
During the first several months of our relationship, Rachel underwent radiation for the third recurrence of cancer. We functioned well as patient and caregiver because we’d both had practice! This radical difference in our roles didn’t hamper our relationship, though, because my time with the hospice had taught me to see the essential person inside the illness, and not to be afraid in the presence of suffering.
在最初的几个月里我们的关系，雷切尔接受辐射的第三次复发的癌症。我们的运作以及病人和照顾者，因为我们都希望有实践！这种激进的差异在我们的角色并没有妨碍我们之间的关系，因为我的时间与安宁告诉我看到里面的重要的人的疾病，而不是害怕，在场的痛苦。
我也不清楚对不对，但楼主，就看在我一句一句的翻译的份上，给我加分吧~~~~~~~~~(*^__^*)...嘻嘻

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Answer 3

I met Rachel at a party and we fell right into a close connection.
我会见了雷切尔在党和我们的权利将下降有着密切的联系。

At the end of the evening, while discussing possible New Year’s Eve
结束时的晚上，在讨论可能的除夕

Rachel confessed she may not be up to going out. She explained, “For the past 2 years, I’ve been having fun with cancer.”
雷切尔供认，她可能无法达到走出去。她解释说： “在过去的2年，我一直在与癌症的乐趣。 ”

For the 2 years before that, I’d been volunteering one day a week in a 28 bed hospice ward as part of my spiritual practice.
二年前，我想是志愿一天一个星期在28床安宁病房的一部分，我的精神的做法。

I knew at once how serious Rachel’s illness was, and I was sensitive to my own urge to run
我知道如何一次严重的雷切尔的病，我是我自己的敏感敦促运行。

But we really liked each other, and fell in love.
但是，我们真的很喜欢对方，并坠入爱河。

Many of my friends were dubious of my taking on the hard work and heartache obviously ahead.
我的许多朋友都怀疑我考虑的辛勤工作和心痛明显提前。

But when they got to know Rachel, they loved her too, and supported us loyally throughout the last year and a half of Rachel’s life.
但当他们结识瑞秋，他们爱她，并在全国各地支持我们的忠实的过去一年半的瑞秋的生命。

During the first several months of our relationship, Rachel underwent radiation for the third recurrence of cancer.
在最初的几个月里我们的关系，雷切尔接受辐射的第三次复发的癌症。

We functioned well as patient and caregiver because we’d both had practice! This radical difference in our roles didn’t hamper our relationship, though, because my time with the hospice had taught me to see the essential person inside the illness, and not to be afraid in the presence of suffering.
我们的运作以及病人和照顾者，因为我们都希望有实践！这种激进的差异在我们的角色并没有妨碍我们之间的关系，不过，因为我的时间与安宁告诉我看到里面的重要的人的疾病，而不是害怕，在场的痛苦。

Answer 4

We functioned well as patient and caregiver because we’d both had practice! This radical difference in our roles didn’t hamper our relationship, though, because my time with the hospice had taught me to see the essential person inside the illness, and not to be afraid in the presence of suffering
我们的运作以及病人和照顾者，因为我们都希望有实践！这种激进的差异在我们的角色并没有妨碍我们之间的关系，因为我的时间与安宁告诉我看到里面的重要的人的疾病，而不是害怕，在场的痛苦