急!帮我写个英语小短文A A wonderful day in the Beijing World Park(80词左右)

提示:星期天,Millie和同学们乘了两个小时的公共汽车来到了北京世界公园。一路上Millie都感觉不舒服(sick),但一进入北京世界公园,看到仿建的(man-made)世界各地一百多处名胜,她立刻被吸引了。他们玩得很高兴。

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Millie and her classmates took two-hour bus to the Beijing World Park on Sunday[On Sunday 放前面也可以]. Millie felt sick on her way there. However, once got in to the park, she was immediately attracked by hundreds of man-made famous place in the world.They had a nice trip.
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第1个回答  2009-05-30
Sunday, Millie and his classmates took two hours' bus to Beijing World Park. On their way, Millie felt sick, but when arriving the Beijing World Park and seeing hundreds of man-made interested place around world, she was attracted by them. They got a happy trip.
第2个回答  2009-05-30
My wonderful day

Today is a Sunday. And it is a colorful day.

My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park!”

So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.

In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.

Sunday is my favorite day,and today is such a Today is a Sunday. And it is a colorful day.

My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park!”

So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.

In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.

Sunday is my favorite day,and today is such a wonderful day!
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