One of the world's most ancient and historically important trade routes, the Silk Road conjures up exotic images of camel caravans, windswept deserts, and such legendary figures as Genghis Khan and Marco Polo. Extending as far as the Indian kingdoms in the west, to present-day Xian in China in the east, the Silk Road was already a crossroads of Asia by the third century B.C. 世界上最古老，历史上最重要的贸易路线之一——丝绸之路，总给人一种富有异国情调的印象：骆驼商队、狂风肆虐的沙漠，还有诸如成吉思汗和马可波罗等传奇人物。
丝绸之路绵亘远长，西至印度王国，东到中国现在的西安，早在公元前三世纪，丝绸之路就已经成为了亚洲交通的十字路口。
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我的家乡在永福县城，这里是中国著名的“福寿之乡”。
My hometown is in eternal blessing county, here is the famous Chinese "fushou town.
以前，我们县是各方面最落后的县，大多数的人生活水平很低，县城街道两旁的房子低矮破旧，马路也是狭窄又不平。
Previously, we county is various aspects most backward county, most people live at very low levels, the county on both side of the street house low shabby, the road is narrow and rough.
改革开放后，尤其是近几年，我们县城发生了翻天覆地的变化。
Since the reform and opening up, especially in recent years, our county has undergone earth-shaking changes.
你看那街道两旁郁郁葱葱的桂花树呀，一到开花季节，一阵阵清香扑鼻而来，让人心旷神怡；
You see that line the streets lush GuiHuaShu ah, one to flowering season, waves infested scent and e, let a person relaxed and happy,
洁净宽阔的马路，漂亮整齐的楼房，新建成的美丽的居民小区，改建后焕然一新的学校，还有让大人、小孩休闲玩耍的天凤广场，在碧如玉带的西江河环绕下，为这座小城古镇增添了一份亮丽。
Clean the broad street, nice neat buildings, newly built the beautiful dweller, rebuilt after new-look school, there let *** and children's day to relax and play, such as in phoenix square of the xijiang river GHT silk, for this town around town add a bright beautiful.
优美的自然环境，清新的空气，让永福的长寿老人越来越多。
The beautiful natural environment, the fresh air, let ever blessed longevity more and more.
每天清晨，在天凤广场上，你会看到精神抖擞的老人们有的在打太极拳，有的练舞练剑，还有的在做永福人自创的福寿操……
Every morning, in the days of chicken on the square, you will see jingshendousou the old people in doing taiji, some practicing dance in practicing sword, and eternal blessing person do a made-up ampullarium *** 。
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他们每个人的脸上都洋溢着喜悦。
They everybody's face lit up with joy.
是啊！
Yeah!
他们哪有时间去老呢。
They which have time to old?
现在你会知道我的家乡为什么有那么多的百岁老人了吧。
Now you will know my hometown why there are so many centenarians now.
这就是我的家 。
This is my home.
The Silk Road is a historically important international trade route beeen China and Europe.Because China silk prised a large proportion of the trade along this ancient road, in 1877,it was named the “Silk Road” by an eminent German geographer. Usually it can be classifiedinto Northern Silk Road on the land, Southern Silk Road on the land and the Silk Road on thesea. The Northern Silk Road on the land usually refers to the routes start from Chang'an,traveling west to Wuwei, passing though Hexi Corridor to Dunhuang and go west to Europe.The Southern Silk Road on the land usually refers to the route starts from Sichuan Provinceand go south to India and Burma. It is now included in the World Heritage List of UNESCO.33 historical sites are along the road in total and 22 of them distribute in Shaanxi, Henan,Gansu and Xinjiang of China. （换）From the time Zhang Qian opened up the world-famous Silk Road during the Han Dynasty,until the collapse of the Yuan Dynasty, it enjoyed a history of about 1,600 years. （换）Theancient Silk Road contributed greatly to the cultural exchange beeen China and the West.From the second century BC to the fifteenth century AD, splendid civilizations among China,India, Greece, Persia and Rome were exchanged along this famous trade route, making theroute a great “Cultural Bridge” beeen Asia and Europe. Together with the economic andpolitical exchange beeen the East and West, religions of the West were introduced intoChina via the world-famous route. Like Buddhi *** and Islam. From time immemorial, the SilkRoad has been a route of friendly intercourse beeen the Chinese and foreign people. TheSilk Road greatly promoted the exchanges of economy, technology and culture among theAsian, the European and theAfrican. It made the whole world colorful.（换）The of the Silk Road for today is a Chinese framework named One Belt and One Road, whichfor anizing multinational economic development through o ponent plans, theland-based Silk Road Economic Belt and oceangoing Maritime Silk Road. I look for the newSilk Road will play an increasingly active role in generating for the benefit of all humanity.。
Water-Sprinkling Festival is a major festival of the Dai nationality that es about o weeks after Qingming Festival in early April. The first day just like the eve of Spring Festival, the third day just like the spring festival day, means a first of a new year, stands for new, happy and lucky day. On the morning of the first day of Water Sprinkling Festival, people of Dai nationality will go to Buddhist Temple for bathing their numen, and then begin to sprinkle with blessing each other. They are dancing as well as calling: "water! water! water!"
During the Water Sprinkling Festival, young Dai people like playing Throw Seven-barks game to look for girlfriend or boyfriend. Boating Race is also very necessary during the days. It will hold in Lancang River, which will add more fun and happiness on the days!
Chinese beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts representing China.
The quality is not only beautiful, but also colorful, silk, satin, silk, Luo, Kam, textile, velvet, crepe everything, reaching more than 10 major categories. There are thousands of species of Lu silk, such as the soft velvet, burnt-out geette light, beautiful colors of flowers interined
charmeuse, *** ooth as a mirror of the plain o-wire charmeuse. Satin-type fabricis, the most successful innovation, adopts the technology of shiny silver by ancient silk workers.
10~ 20 pieces of warp weaves show a variety of changing landscapes, flowers and brocade patterns. They are like Galaxy landing, the stars inkling. The ancient incense satin silk is interined with flowers and birds characters, which win great praise and love from the Chinese and foreign guests. They are honored as beautiful "flower of oriental art."
Last sunday. I and my father, mother, grandparents, brother went to qilianshan
by bus. In the morning we came down the mountain. I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired,it began to rain,My West Lake silk umbrella missed,. Dad said to me,“Jill, don't do anything halfway.”at last,So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, I was thirsty, my mother bought me a bottle of water, .finally we went home.finally,Since then, I've kept the umbrella。i was very happy
about 4,000 years ago the chinese discovered the secret of the cocoon. no one knows exactly how or when this important discovery was made. one story says that a young princess was drinking tea in her garden and watching silkworms spin cocoons. by chance one dropped into her tea and the hot tea made it soft. when the girl tried to take the cocoon out of her tea, it became separated and she pulled out a long silk thread. the chinese learned to weave the silk thread into cloth. for 2,000 years they were the only people who knew how to make silk. the chinese merchants sold silk cloth throughout asia and europe and became rich.silk was so expensive that it was called “the cloth of kings”e799bee5baa6e79fa5e98193e4b893e5b19e31333337623431 .everyone wanted to learn how to make silk, but the chinese kept the secret carefully guarded①. finally the secret was stolen. in the sixth century, o monks learned about the silkworms and their cocoons. they spent several years in china and finaly found a way to take some silkworm eggs out of the country. the monks always carried bamboo canes②. one day they hid some eggs in the hollow canes, and walked out of china with them. it is said that the development of the silk industry in other countries came from those few eggs which the monks had carried out of china.。
Chinese beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts representing China.
The quality is not only beautiful, but also colorful, silk, satin, silk, Luo, Kam, textile, velvet, crepe everything, reaching more than 10 major categories. There are thousands of species of Lu silk, such as the soft velvet, burnt-out geette light, beautiful colors of flowers interined
charmeuse, *** ooth as a mirror of the plain o-wire charmeuse. Satin-type fabricis, the most successful innovation, adopts the technology of shiny silver by ancient silk workers.
10~62616964757a686964616fe78988e69d8331333337616635 20 pieces of warp weaves show a variety of changing landscapes, flowers and brocade patterns. They are like Galaxy landing, the stars inkling. The ancient incense satin silk is interined with flowers and birds characters, which win great praise and love from the Chinese and foreign guests. They are honored as beautiful "flower of oriental art."
Since I was very *** all,there was a song about Guilin“I want to Guilin,but when I have money,I don't have time…''，this is the first impression I have on Guilin,it is so attracting.As the song's great power,I said to myself,when I grew up,I must go toGuilin.When I was in high school,I had the chance to visit there,in the summer holiday,my mother asked me to go there with her to visit an old friend.I was so excited,my long dream would e true.I packed my stuff,went to the bus.In the morning,we arrived atGuilin,this was the first time I got so close to it,I took a deep breath,watching all the things in the street.During the summer holiday,I visited all the scene there,they were so beautiful,no wonder people said“Guilin's scenery ranks first”.。