关于up的短语作文,那位老师给指点一二 An unusual Sunday?

I never get up early onholiday.
but this Sunday ,I opened my eyes,looked out of the window,It was dim.I opened up my eyes,It was five o'clock.
I climb up then I went to the toilet for wash up.
It's 5:10, I warmed up a cup of milk,.
just then, the mobile phone rang,at the table.
It was my pal.
I packed up the phone. "I've just arrived the subway station." He said.
"I'm as quickly as possible to meet you."I answered.
in the following time,I swallowed up two pieces of bread and drunk up one cup of milk rapidly.and dressed up for a party.
When I left my house,I locked up the door and the windows.
请老师给挑挑错,语法方面有什么要改的地方吗?谢谢

第1个回答  2020-04-22

I never get up early on holiday.
but this Sunday ,I opened my eyes,looked out of the window,It was dim.I opened up my eyes,It was five o'clock.
I climed up and  then I went to the toilet for washing up. 
It was 5:10, I warmed up a cup of milk,.
just then, the mobile phone on the table was ringing,
It was my pal. 
I picked up the phone. "I've just arrived the subway station." He said.
"I'm as quickly as possible to meet you."I answered. 
in the following time,I swallowed up two pieces of bread and drunk up a cup of milk rapidly.and dressed up for a party.
When I left my house,I locked up the door and the windows.

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超级感谢,老师辛苦了!

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