英语高手进汉译英

今天下午我们有个英语演讲比赛 帮忙翻译下(多来点从句之类的 给点力 呵呵)
今天我演讲的题目是 我有一个梦想 每个人都有自己的梦想 我也不例外
我的梦想就是做一个软件工程师 我为这么想干这个职业呢? 因为他使我疯狂 他让我兴奋 从我8岁起 我就接触了电脑 在我们这一代我接触的算早点的了 我第一眼看到他我就对他产生了不可抗拒的兴趣 10年过去了 我依然喜欢电脑 喜欢软件 在这十年里 我经常和父母因为电脑的问题吵架 因为我几乎天天都坐在电脑桌旁 我大部分时间都是在找一些简便可用的软件 有时候也玩玩游戏 。这10年我从没有改变过梦想 我依然喜欢电脑 现在我是一个高中生 我面临着高考 我想报一个软件专业的大学 所以我现在必须要努力学习! 我相信 我可以 我会为了我的梦想奋勇拼搏
很急啊 谁先来分先给谁
有的语序可能有点乱 你们要觉的乱也可以小型的修改一下 只要我这个内容不变就行 比如说加一些插入语什么的 让我的句子华丽起来

第1个回答  2011-03-11
手工译的。语序有稍微调整.
注:你确定你是想把电脑说成“他”? 楼上的都用了"he" 来代指你的电脑。我译成 "it" 没有用 "he"

My speech today is about following your dreams. Everyone has a dream. So do I. My dream is to become a software engineer. Why do I want to go for this profession? Well, because it's about this exciting subject of learning that I am just crazy about. Ever since the first time I came across the computer at the age of eight, which is a fairly young age among my generation of first-time computer users, I started to develop an irresistible interest. It has been 10 years since then. In the past 10 years, I often had fights with my parents about it, because I would sit in front of the computer everyday whenever I had time. Most of the time I spent searching for easy-to-use softwares, other times I play games using the computer. But the most important thing is that after 10 years time, I still like everything about computer, especially the softwares. I have never changed my dream in the past 10 years. I am a high school student getting ready for the national university entrance exams. I would love to go to university and study software engineering, so I must study the hardest I can. I believe I am capable of it. For the sake my dream, I will do my absolute best!
第2个回答  2011-03-11
The topic of my speech today is I have a dream that everyone has their own dreams I have no exception
My dream is to be a software engineer I for so want to do this career? Because he makes me crazy he excites me from my 8-year-old since I came into contact with the computer in our generation I touch calculate the early I first saw him I to he produced irresistible interested in ten years later I still like computer like software in the past ten years I often and parents because the computer the question quarrel because I almost everyday sit at the computer table I spent most of my time looking for some simple available software is also sometimes playing games. This 10 years I never change a dream I still like computer now I am a senior high school student I faced the university entrance exam I want to report a software professional university so now I must study hard! I believe I can I for my dream valiant struggle本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答  2011-03-11
This afternoon we have to help translate English speech contest under the (multi-clause like to point to the point of force Oh)
My topic today is I have a dream that everyone has their own dreams I am no exception
My dream is to be a software engineer so I wanted to do this career? He made me mad because he got me from my contacts since I was 8, the computer in our generation, my early exposure to the operator of the I first saw him I had him irresistible to the interest 10 years later I still like the computer like software in this decade, and I often quarrel with their parents because of computer problems because I am sitting at a computer almost every day, most of the time table I am looking for some simple software can sometimes play games. This 10-year dream I never changed I still like the computer I am a high school student I am now facing the entrance of a software professional I would like to report the university so I must study hard now! I believe I can I will courageously fighting for my dream
第4个回答  2011-03-11
I have a dream that everyone has their own dreams I have no exception

My dream is to be a software engineer I for so want to do this career? Because he makes me crazy he excites me from my 8-year-old since I came into contact with the computer in our generation I touch calculate the early I first saw him I to he produced irresistible interested in ten years later I still like computer like software in the past ten years I often and parents because the computer the question quarrel because I almost everyday sit at the computer table I spent most of my time looking for some simple available software is also sometimes playing games. This 10 years I never change a dream I still like computer now I am a senior high school student I faced the university entrance exam I want to report a software professional university so now I must study hard! I believe I can I for my dream valiant struggle
第5个回答  2011-03-11
Today my topic today is I have a dream 楼上的不错只不过第一句有缺陷
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