英语翻译高手进

帮忙用英语翻译一篇自我介绍:早上好,很荣幸站在这儿向你们介绍自己。我知道有很多同学都认识我了,但没关系。我叫XXX,是一位性格开朗的女孩,有人说我长得像洋娃娃,我的爱好广泛。总之,很高兴与大家成为同学,希望今后能与大家和睦相处,谢谢!
(高一水平就好)

第1个回答  2008-10-18
Good morning everyone,it is my greatest honor to introduce myself to you.
I know many classmates have already known me,but I still want to say something.My name is ***,a cheerful and easy-going girl,some people say I look like a doll.I have a wide-extended intrest.In short, it's a very happy experience to be classmate with you, and I hope we can live in harmony in the following days.That's it.Thank you!

早上好后面最好加上一句 大家好。这是一种习惯。原句中的 但没关系 一句
译成but i still want to say sth 比较自然连贯。今后 有将来的意思 但是翻译时译成following days 比较贴切。

以上是我的译文和建议,与翻译上讲究的信达雅还有一定的差距,希望与各位高手切磋切磋!
第2个回答  2008-10-15
首先,在打招呼的时候最好用上eveyone这个词,会概括的比较全面。

最后,在3Q前,应该加上that`s all. 这样说,无论是在别人读起来或是自己说出来都会觉得你很有礼貌。 OK啦。

Good morning everyone,
I am honored to stand here to introduce you to their own.
I know there are many students who know me,
but it does not matter.
My name is XXX, is a cheerful character of the girls,
some people say I look like a doll,
I love a wide range.
In short,
and we are pleased to be hoped that in the future be able to live in harmony with you.

that`s all. thank you!
第3个回答  2008-10-21
Good morning, it is an hornor to be here and introducing myself to you guys(这个You guys有点口语化 如果正规场合不要用,如果正规场合的花还是用everyone把)。I know that many of you have already known about me, but its all right. My name is ... im a quite outgoing girl, some people say that i look like a doll =), i have heaps(这也是口语,正规用many 或 lot of)hobbies. Anyway, its so glad to be friends with you, i wish we will get along very well.Thanks
第4个回答  2008-10-19
Good morning, I am honored to stand here to introduce you to their own. I know there are many students who know me, but it does not matter. My name is XXX, is a cheerful character of the girls, some people say I look like a doll, I love a wide range. In short, and we are pleased to be hoped that in the future be able to live in harmony with you, thank you!

希望对你有帮助,这是我辛苦的成果,我并不是向他们一样用软件一翻,,不过还是谢谢你
第5个回答  2008-10-17
In the morning is good, is honored very much stands introduces itself in here to you. I knew that had many schoolmates to know me, but has not related. I call XXX, is an open and bright girl, some people said that I am long look like the foreign-style doll, my hobby is widespread. In brief, becomes schoolmate very happily with everybody, hoped that from now on can live together in peace and harmony with everybody, thanks!雅虎翻译软件翻得

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