第1个回答 2019-05-21
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日记是人们对日常生活的记录,用来记述自己一天生活的所见、
所闻、所问、所思、所感。英文日记通常由两部分构成,即书端和正
文,
其格式与中文相同,
下面就是英文日记各部分的书写格式示意图:
那么,用英语写日记应注意哪些方面的问题呢?
1.
注意日期、星期和天气的书写位置。
日期和星期要写在正文的左上角,
其顺序多是“星期
+
月、
日、
年”,
也有把星期放在后面的,
如“
2003
年
11
月
22
日,
星期一”
可
写
为
“
Monday
November
22,
2003
或
November
22,
2003
Monday
”。
天气情况应写在正文的右上角,
如:
Fine,
Rainy,
Cloudy,
Windy
等。
2.
关于标题的书写。
在日期和天气的下一行中间可以写上日记小标题,
也可以不写
标题。
3.
关于正文的书写。
正文是关于一天生活的记载,
也是日记的主题。
在书写正文时要
做到:
1
)要选择当天感受最深刻、最有意义的事件来描述,不要
写成简单的流水帐;
2
)日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事
情,所以要用第一人称来写;
3
)日记多是在当天晚上来记述当天
发生过的事情,
因为动词时态常使用过去时,
但使用时必须灵活掌握,
如景物描写、议论某事、对话引语等要使用现在时态;
4
)日记应
以时间发生的先后顺序来展开,
并且要简明扼要,
条理清楚,
写出真
实感。
[精彩展品]
Sunday
May
21,2003
Sunny
Going
on
a
Picnic
Today
was
Sunday.
The
weather
was
fine
and
warm.
The
sky
was
very
clear
and
blue.
My
classmates
and
I
were
very
happy,
because
we
went
out
for
a
picnic
at
Nanshan
Hill.
We
went
to
Nanshan
Hill
by
bike
with
fruits,
eggs,
meat,
vegetables,
knives
and
some
other
things.
About
one
and
a
half
hours
later,
we
came
to
a
nice
place
at
the
foot
of
the
hill.
There
were
many
beautiful
flowers
and
green
trees.
Birds
sang
their
sweet
songs.
How
pleased
we
were!
Then
we
were
busy
with
the
picnic.
Some
of
us
were
getting
water,
some
were
cutting
the
meat
and
vegetables
and
cook,
others
were
sitting
on
the
grass
and
waiting
for
nice
lunch.
At
about
13
o'clock,
our
lunch
was
ready.
We
all
sat
around
on
the
green
grass,
singing,
talking,
eating
and
drinking.
At
about
16:00
we
began
packing
for
our
return.
What
a
nice
time
we
were
having!
[点到为止]
小作者能用准确、
地道的语言,
简练的语句非常生动地描写
出了野炊的场面。这篇文章条理清楚,尤其是“
some
„
some
„
,
others
„”句型,以及
singing,
eating
等现在分词作伴随状语的
运用,
使这篇日记增色不少。
本文结尾使用了一个感叹句,
更加反映
出小作者对这次野炊的真实情感。
[展厅发布会]
同学们平时都有用中文写日记的习惯吧。
在学过
Lesson
78
之后,
再根据我们今天“作文展厅”的讲解,
希望你们每天能把中文
日记改用英文来书写。
因为,
每天坚持写英语日记不仅能提高你们对
语言的运用能力,
同时更能不断促进和复习巩固所学的英语知识,
从
而进一步提高你们的写作水平。