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Question

(1) This is first time I speak in English before so many people. I feel
(2) nervous. But I’d like to use this opportunity to introduce myself.
(3) I hope you to know me better. My name is Lin Hua, and I’m
(4) fifteen years old. I’ve been quite happily in this class.
(5) We learn English, Chinese, mathematics and several
(6) subjects together,. We play games together in with
(7) break and after school. We help each other with
(8) our school problems. I feel in home in this class.
(9) I like English and Chinese more. I hope I could work
(10) as an newspaperman in the future.

Answer 1

(1) this is ^ the (2) But 改为And (3) 去掉to (4)happily 改为happy (5)several 后加other((6) 去掉with(7) break 后加s ( 8)in 改为at （9）more 改为most.(10)an 改为 a 仅供参考哈!

Answer 2

呵呵，给你改了呀！追问

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追答

刚才不是你啊？同样的文章有人问过了。
1) This is the first time I speak in English in front of so many people. I feel
(2) nervous. But I’d like to take this opportunity to introduce myself.
(3) I hope you will know me better. My name is Lin Hua, and I’m
(4) fifteen years old. I’ve been quite happy in this class.
(5) We study English, Chinese, mathematics and several
(6) subjects together,. We play games together in
(7) break or after school. We help each other with
(8) our school problems. I feel at home in this class.
(9) I like English and Chinese best . I hope I could work
(10) as a newspaperman in the future.

追问

这还真不是我 我只是第一次 哈哈 非常感谢你哈

追答

没有关系！共同学习！

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Answer 3

(1) This is(the) first time
(2)
(3)know (about)me
(4) happily-->happy
(5) several(other)
(6)in with--->within
(7)
(8) in home -->at home
(9) most
(10)an newspaperman --->a newspaperman