求翻译成地道英语~

Question

我渴望支持与力量。
没有什么可以阻挡追求梦想与荣耀。
循序渐进，不骄不躁，我更愿做我自己。
过一种高尚而诚实的生活。当你年老时回想起过去，你就能再一次享受人生。

Answer 1

我渴望支持与力量。
I crave support and power.

没有什么可以阻挡追求梦想与荣耀。
Nothing can block the pursuit of one's dream and glory.

循序渐进，不骄不躁，我更愿做我自己。
Step by step, free from arrogance and rashness, I prefer to be my own man.
我更愿做我自己 直译是 I prefer to be myself
但我觉得 be my own man , 一个英语思维的表达方式，是更好的翻译。

过一种高尚而诚实的生活。当你年老时回想起过去，你就能再一次享受人生。
Lead a noble and honorable life, so that when you get older and think back, you'll be able to again enjoy those beautiful memories.
你就能再一次享受人生 直译是 you will once again be able to enjoy life
但 enjoy those beautiful memories 表达比较好的语境 。

我自己的翻译，保证地道、语法正确。

Answer 2

I‘m craving for support and power.
Nothing can hold back the steps of chasing dreams and glory.
little by little, without being cocky and testy, i perfer to be myself.
To lead a life that can be called supreme and honesty.
While retracing the past when you are a senior, you can once more enjoy the lifetime earthy pleasure.本回答被提问者和网友采纳