第1个回答 2009-12-31
11 than后加that
12 every改为Each
13 he改为she
14 was改为were
15 去掉that
16 第二句开端加where
17 is改为are
18 further后加on
19 a改为the
20 from改为in本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答 2009-12-31
11 More corn is produced in the United States than that in any other country in the world.
12. When every time I was in trouble, my husband would not lend a hand.
13. She began to understand what he really wanted. (主语不一致 y要么把前面的she改成he )
14 Every man, woman, and child were asked to contribute.
15. John got a job, so that he could be independent of his parents.（把that 去掉）
16 Where there are plenty of sun and rain, the fields are green.
17. The word beautiful is not always the same as the good.
18 The committee will discuss the matter further. ( futher有问题，但如果只能改一个词那就不知道怎么改了 我建议改成to a further step)
19. Drunken people are not allowed to drive a car. （m没错把）
20 I caught the boys stealing apples from my garden. （m没错把
第3个回答 2009-12-31
11.More corns are produced in the United States compare to other countries.
12.Every time when i wass in trouble, my husband would lend me a hand .
13.She began to know what she really wanted .
14.All the people were asked to contribute.
15.John got a job , so, he could be independent from his parents.
16.Wherever is plenty of sunlight and rain ,the fields are green.
17.The beautiful is not always link to good
18.The committee members will discuss the matter further.
19.Drunkens are not allowed to drive cars.
20.I caught the boys who had stolen apples from my garden.