第1个回答 2010-02-03
1.Jim's elder sister can speak French ..very beautiful.
(very beautifully) beautiful修饰动词时必须是副词形式
2.What is the wrong with Jennyfer's grandpa?
去掉the 或改正成what's the matter
3.which is the most interesting, reading or swimming.
more interesting 貌似要改两个地方 只有两个选项 所以不能用most most只用在有三个或三个选项以上的情况
4.there is twenty yuans on the table.
there are... 后面都有yuans复数形式了
5.Who is heaviest in your class?
who is the heaviest 最重 表特指 需要用the表示
6.My mother doesn't care on her health at all.
care about care about v. 担心
迈克尔杰克逊有首歌叫做they don't really care about us他们一点都不关心我们
7.Peter has many interesting story to tell us.
stories 要用复数 与前面的many相呼应
8.Why dong't you want to play and Lily?
这句话整个就不通啊
翻新一下：Why don't you want to play with Lily?
9.Johnny always does his homeworks after school.
homework是只有单数形式的 同样的有people,sheep之类的
10.Jack hope to go to the night zoo with his father very much.
Jack hopes... 单三形式 有night zoo这种说法么？。。。
11.what do you like better, juice, coffee or tea?
把better去掉 better只用在两个选项的情况
12.Will you help someone in trouble?
把someone改成anyone anyone用于疑问句和否定句 someone用于肯定句
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第2个回答 2010-02-03
1.beautiful改成well
2.the去掉
3.the most改成more
4.is改成are
5.heaviest前加the
6.on改成about
7.story改成stories
8.and改成with
9.homeworks改成homework
10.hope改成hopes
11.better改成best
12.in改成with本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答 2010-02-03
1 beautifully,speak是动词，要用副词修饰
2 the 去掉
3 the most 变成more
4 yuans 变成yuan 单位不用复数
5 在heaviest 前加the 最高级
6 care on 变成care about
7 story 变成stories
8 and变成with
9 homeworks变成homework
10 hope变成hopes
11 better变成best
12 someone后加who is
第4个回答 2010-02-03
1.Jim's elder sister can speak French very well.
2.What is wrong with Jennyfer's grandpa?
3.which is the more interesting, reading or sswimming.
4.there is twenty yuan on the table.
5.Who is the heaviest in your class?
6.My mother doesn't care with her health at all.
7.Peter has many interesting stories to tell us.
8.Why don't you want to play with Lily?
9.Johnny always does his homework after school.
10.Jack hopes to go to the night zoo with his father very much.
11.what do you like best, juice, coffee or tea?
12.Will you help someone with trouble?
看看这些题、我级别应该比你高吧……
这些题是我自己做的、
正确率、、、远目……
囧！竟然有人比我先答了
第5个回答 2010-02-03
1. Jim's elder sister can speak French very beautifully.
2.What is wrong with Jennyfer's grandpa?
3.which is more interesting, reading or sswimming.
4.there is twenty yuan on the table.
5.Who is the heaviest in your class?
6.My mother doesn't care about her health at all.
7.Peter has many interesting storys to tell us.
8.Why dong't you want to play with Lily?
9.Johnny always does his homework after school.
10.Jack hopes to go to the night zoo with his father very much.
11.which do you like the most, juice, coffee or tea?
12.Will you help someone who is in trouble?