第1个回答 2014-01-20
按照顺序来.
第一, 在hear后面加上that,因为是从句.
去掉next Friday前面的the
将fortunately改为unfortunately
把although改成because
第二,
在find difficult中间加一个it, 变成find it difficult
30 minute改为30-minute
here 变成there
talk with变成talk about
having变have
最后的Friday前面要加On, 变成see you on Friday.