急急急!可以帮忙看看下面的英语有没有语病!

大佬们,来纠语病?Good afternoon, teachers, let me introduce myself. My name is XX, 17 years old. I live in XX, a small and crowded town. I like it very much, but I just don't agree with it. I am easy to be shy, but I am very enthusiastic. If it is within my power, I will certainly help. I have many interests and hobbies, of which my favorite is painting, especially landscape painting, because I like the vastness of the sea and the vastness of the sky. This is also why I chose this major. I like pop music, but this is not as good as pure music I love. I am not a quiet girl, but I want to calm my heart. After my introduction, I am very honored to attend this interview. If I have the chance to come to XX in the future, I will definitely do my best to study, live up to myself, and say goodbye myformer self.

第1个回答  2019-03-09
语态,时态都错了,前面要用过去完成时.要改成Please noted that I had received the bank receipt,I would inform you when the payment got it asap.追问

能改吗

你忽悠我??

第2个回答  2019-03-09
Have you seen the cartoon Rozen Maiden ? I think it is the best cartoon I have ever seen, therefore, I find there are no other cartoons better than Rozen Maiden after I watching them. Now, let me begin to introduce this cartoon briefly to you. (Start to open the PPT) As you can see, in this cartoon there are seven dummy young girls, they begin fightting for本回答被网友采纳
第3个回答  2019-03-09
自己的作业还是自己完成的好,打这么多的英语都累
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