写作思路：可以写出看手机有哪些不正确的看法，然后再给出合理看手机的建议，语言要通顺，避免语法使用错误。
正文：
Now many people are addicted to mobile phones. Mobile phones can affect students' learning, reduce their eyesight, and cause eye pain after watching for a long time.
现在有许多人都沉迷于手机，手机会影响学生的学习，能让视力下降，看时间长了还会眼睛疼。
Because looking at mobile phones, some people cross the road and are hit by a car, some people run into a power pole, some people fall into the sewer, some people drive to play with mobile phones and can rear end. Children like to wear headphones and ride bicycles, so that they can't hear others honking. We should not look at mobile phones in meetings, subways, parties and meals.
因为看手机，有人过马路被车撞了，有人碰到了电线杆，有人掉进了下水道里，有人开车玩手机，会追尾，小孩子喜欢带着耳机，骑着自行车，这样，别人按喇叭他也听不到。开会看手机，地铁看手机，聚会、吃饭看手机，这些现象都不应该。
My aunt loves to play very much. On Sunday, we went out for dinner and came back at nine o'clock. I told her to go to bed, but she didn't listen. She went to the toilet, and I secretly looked at it. It was hairy and played mahjong! Two out of three! At this moment, still playing mobile phone!
我的姑姑特别爱玩，星期日，我们去外面吃了饭，回来就九点了，我叫姑姑睡觉，她却不听，她上了一个厕所，我就偷偷看了看，上面发着，打麻将啦！三局两胜！都这会儿啦，还玩手机！
I have a suggestion:
我有一个建议：
1、Do not play mobile phones, insomnia, myopia, the best set a good time, never more than 30 minutes.
1、不要玩手机，眼睛失眠、近视，最好定好时间，绝不超过三十分钟。
2、If you have something urgent, just look at your mobile phone. If you don't, try not to look at it.
2、大家有急事就看看手机，没有的话就尽量不要看。
3、It's said that some people still jump from the building to watch mobile phones. Mobile phones give us a great shake. Try not to watch them.
3、听说看手机有的人还跳楼，手机给我们的动摇很大，尽量不要看。
Such a small mobile phone, can have so much harm, we must set a time to see the mobile phone, so it is not dangerous.
这么一个小小的手机，能有这么多的危害，大家要定时间看手机，这样不危险。