英语短文改错

Question

Most Americans don’t like to get advices from members of their family. When they are in a trouble and need advice, they write letters for newspapers or magazines. Most newspapers print letters from readers with problems. along with the letters there have answers written by people who are supposing to know how to solve such problems.sone the writers are doctors .others the lawyers or teachers .there's one writer,a girl named by anger ,who started writing advice for newspaper readers at the age of ten .her advice is of greatly value to young readers .
改了以后麻烦说下原因

Answer 1

Answer 2

Most Americans don’t like to get advices from members of their family（应该是复数。。。families）. When they are in a trouble（麻烦的固定短语不需要定冠词，应该是 in trouble） and need advice（复数，加S）, they write letters for（写信发给的介词是TO） newspapers or magazines. Most newspapers print letters from readers with problems. along with the letters there have answers written by people who are supposing to know how to solve such problems.sone（这个是拼错了吧 SOME） the writers are doctors .others the lawyers or teachers .there's one writer,a girl named by anger ,who started writing advice for newspaper readers at the age of ten .her advice is of greatly value to young readers .