英语作文!高手进!

1:以Surfing on the Internet为题,写一篇120词左右的短文;
2:在第一段中,以On the one hand,On the other hand连接句型,从网络使用人数和网络使用领域两方面论述网络的普及;
3:在第二段中,以Firstly,Secondly,Finally来过渡,论述网络的诸多优点;
4:在第三段中,先以however转移话题,并用In the first place,In the second place连接句型,从两方面论述网络的弊端;
5:在第四段中,以but,on the other hand连接句型,辩证地摆出自己的观点。
最好是自己写的!不要范文!

第1个回答  2010-09-18
考研的时候,就看过这篇的范文。。。而且和你说的一样。囧,这就是写的,然后修改了些。。。。
Surfing on the Internet is becoming increasingly popular nowadays. One one hand, the number of people who use the Internet doubles every week. When people meet each other, one common greeting is “Have you surfed on the Internet today?”.One the other hand ,Internet is used in all area .You can see computer in schools,universities,banks and offices.
Internet brings a new world and makes people feel closer. Because of the Internet, the whole world turns into an earth village. Firstly, we can communicate with our friends or relatives conveniently and rapidly. Secondly, Internet brings us lots of fun. There are so many games on it. What’s more, we can chat with others more freely. When we talk with different people, we probably will make friends with them. Thirdly, many of us like shopping online. Sometimes we can find something useful and cheap through the Internet. Finally, E-mail is very popular among many businessmen. It saves the feet and endless amounts of time.
However, just as a coin has two sides, the Internet also has its disadvantages. For example, people spend too much time surfing on line. There is no doubt that it will have a bad effect on their work or study. As for the children, some bad information may also have a negative influence on them, which will even lead them to go against the law.
In my opinion, Internet is just a part of our lives. Living in the 21st century, we need to make good use of this new, convenient and rapid tool. But we must stress it: it is just a tool, not life itself. So, let us keep the balance and make the Internet do good to our life, work and study.
第2个回答  2010-09-19
Surfing on the Internet
Nowadays, the internet is already an unseperated part of our lives. On one hand, the population of net users has been increasing very fast,the number was reported to be more than three hundred million in 2008;on the other hand, internet has been widely applied in almost every field.
Why does we surf the internet so much? There are several reasons.Firstly, internet can help us to get information more easily, we can access and download deta from the inernet no matter where and when.Secondly, we can learn a lot from the internet just by clicking the mouse.Finally, we can get connection with anyone in the world, share our feelings.
However, the internet has its disadvantages.In the first place, the games and videos on the internet may distract the attention of youth from study.In the second place, the information on the internet may not be true, it will mislead us.
All in all, every sword has two sides. We can make good use of the internet, and be careful with it at the same time.
我是自己写的哦~花了15分钟, by the way, 你是大学生?是英语专业吗?本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答  2010-09-26
Surfing on the Internet
On the one hand ,More and more people surf the Internet,The Internet is becoming one part of our life;On the other hand ,The Internet is almost used in all kinds of fields including governments,banks,commanies and schools etc.
Internet has lots of advantages to do all sorts of work Firstly, People can get much useful information from the Interet.It
also help us to save the information for long a time .Secondly,computer works very fast, It is convenient and safe to use the Internet.Especially in international ,The Internet play a very important role.Finally ,Internet bring us lots of pleasure.For example,We can make many friends all over the world on the Internet ,we can play games,download useful materials. We can chat with our friends and relatives even if there is a very long distance between us,It can save lots of money for us.
However ,In the first place ,Internet is a kind of tool that we can live common live without the Internet.In the second place,we also receive much useless information.Swindlers extort something from us on the Internet...
Internet is very useful and helpful ,but on the other hand anything is not always perfect,I think we can regard the Internet as our good friends though sometimes it has some shortcomings.
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