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My Bike
Four months ago, my father bought a bike for me. I was very excited at the green bike. The colour green is very beautiful in the sun. Its wheels are very big. It is a bike in fashion though it’s not a racing bike. We can’t ride a racing bike to school.
During the first two weeks, my bike was very clean. The green on the bike was very fresh and beautiful. But now, it is a little old and it’s a little dirty. I must clean it once a week.
My bike has a good name. Its name is Emma. Now, 【I am a Dongzhou Middle School student.】 I go to school and go home by bike every day. Emma is my good friend. I think I will take good care of my good friend.
以及翻译
四个月前,我父亲给我买了一辆自行车。我感到非常兴奋的绿色自行车。绿色的颜色在阳光下十分美丽。它的轮子是非常大的。这是一个在时尚自行车,虽然它不是跑车。我们不能骑自行车上学时赛车。
在头两个星期,我的自行车是很干净。自行车上的绿色很新鲜,美丽。但现在,它是一个小老头,它有一点脏。我必须每周清洁一次。
我的自行车有一个好名字。它的名字是艾玛。现在,【我是东洲中学的学生。】我每天骑自行车上学,回家。爱玛是我的好朋友。我想我会考虑照顾好我的好朋友。
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