第1个回答 2008-12-30
Howerver, there is some disadvantages of it. First, the bell may wake you up when you are sleeping. Second, others may dial the wrong number and disturb you. Third, teacher will telephone your parents about your bad performance at school. As far as I am concerned, telephone has more advantages becasue of the convenience.
建议你调整一下写作顺序。
先写电话的缺点，再写优点。
电话有很多缺点.....但是，我认为电话有更多的优点。一，二，三.........
这样会比较好。
第2个回答 2008-12-30
绝非机译的版本:
However, telephone also has some weak points. Firstly, it might wake you up while you are sleeping. Sencondly, some people might interrupt you because of the wrong dialing. Thirdly, your teacher might call your parents to tell them your performances in school. But I still think its strong points outweigh its weak point since it is very convenient.本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答 2008-12-30
However, the telephone also has its shortcoming. First, when you sleep, the telephone make a sound, it possibly will awaken you by noise. Second: Others possibly make a mistake to disturb you. Third: if you are not good in school, teacher may use the telephone to tell your parents about your performance situation. However, I thought that the telephone have more excellence. Because it is very convenient.
第4个回答 2008-12-30
However,phone have its shortcomings ,too.Firstly,the phone may disturb you when you are asleep.Secondly,others may dial your numbr in a wrong way .thirdly ,when you don't behave well at school ,your teachers can call your parents to tell about your behavior.nevertheless,i think phones have more advantages,for it is convenient.
第5个回答 2008-12-30
however,telephone also has its disadvantages.
first ,when you are sleeping, you will be bothered by the ring.
second, others will make wrong calls for you .
third, if you do not act well in school, the teacher will make a phone call to tell your parents about your recent behaviors.
but i think telephone has more advantages.
because it is very convenient.