找英语大神帮忙看下这个翻译那些有错的帮忙修改下意思大概不变,要地道标准的或者能帮忙重新翻译一下

Question

In addition to my family members,my Elementary school teacher influenced me the most .because She first taught me to write,At the same time,She encouraged me to read more.She let me understand a lot of knowledge and truth.I really appreciate her help.Until now, every time the holiday I will go to see her.

If you're bored.You should do something interesting You should to find some interesting things to do. You can see some comedy movies, This can bring you laughter.If you have time can also choose to go out for a walk.The beautiful scenery can bring you a beautiful mood. Of course,You can find your good friend chat,or go shopping with them

if today is the last day of my life.i hope that i with my family togther My family is the most precious wealth. we want to see the place where I was born .This is the place to start my life .We will go to see my elementary school, middle school and university.This is the place where I grew up. I also want to express my thanks,To my teachers, friends,Thank them for helping me
不是重新翻译下，就是按照原来的意思，帮忙写下标准的英语表达，因为这篇是比较中国式英语的。希望改成地道的英语 不要中文的

Answer 1

In addition to my family members,my elementary school teacher influenced me the most, because she first taught me to write, and at the same time, she encouraged me to read more.She helped me understand a lot of knowledge and truth.I really appreciate her help.Until now, every time there is a holiday I would go to see her.

If you're bored.You should do something interesting. You should to find some interesting things to do. You can see some comedy movies, this can bring you laughter.If you have time can also choose to go out for a walk.The beautiful scenery can bring you to a beautiful mood. Of course,You can find your good friend to chat,or go shopping with them

if today is the last day of my life.i hope that i will be with my family. My family is my most precious wealth. we went to see the place where I was born .This is the place i started my life .We will go to see my elementary school, middle school and university.This is the place where I grew up. I also want to express my thanks,To my teachers, friends,Thanking them for helping me

Answer 2

In addition to my family, my primary school teacher is one of the biggest influence on my.Because she was the first to teach me how to write, at the same time, she encouraged me to read more.She let me understand a lot of knowledge and truth.I really appreciate her help.Until now, every time the holiday I will go to see her.If you are bored.You should do something interesting, you should go to some interesting things to do.You can watch some comedy movies, it can bring you laughter.If you have time can also choose to go out for a walk.The beautiful scenery can bring you a beautiful mood.Of course, you can find your good friend chat, or go shoppingIf today is the last day of my life.I hope my family and my family is the most precious wealth.We would like to see the place where I was born.This is the beginning of my life.We will go to see my elementary school, middle school and university.This is the place where I grew up.I would also like to express my thanks, my teachers, friends, thank them for helping me

Answer 3

Apart from my familes,my Elmentary school teacher has great effect on me,as she is the first one to teach me how to write.At the same time,she encouraged me to read more.It's she who make me understand a varioty of knowledge and truth.I sincerely appreciate her for her help.So,each time I'm free,I'll go to visit her.

If you are bored,you are supposed to do something interesting to do.For example, you may go and watch comedies,which are able to cheer you up.If you have more,you can choose to take a walk,where you can enjoy beatiful scenery that brings you a nice mood.Hence,you may have a chat with your BBF,or go shopping with him.

If today was the last day of my life,I would hope that I shall spend more time with my families,for family is the most precious wealth of the world.It's common that we all want to see our root place where we were born,where we start with our whole lives.If today was the last day of my life,I would go to see my elementary school,middle school and my university,where I was raised.I would want to express my appreciation to my teachers,friends,thank them for these years' great help to me.追问

能不能再帮我翻译点句子的，麻烦了: 她身上很多优秀的品德都影响了我，我很庆幸遇到了一个那么好的老师，是认为一个好老师对于学生的影响是巨大的。 跟朋友互相分享下最近有趣和开心的事情 这样会让你开心起来 一起出去吃美食或者一起去购物

追答

She has many admirable qualities , which influnced me a lot.I feel lucky that I have met such a fablous teacher,who is regarded to be an effctive teacher.

Things like sharing interesting things recently happened to me with my friends make you happy,or you can hang out to have a feast.

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非常麻烦您了！还有些内容想中文发给您，让您结合上面的内容帮我整理翻译下，但是在这里发不出来，您能私信下您的QQ吗？想让您帮忙下，真心麻烦了！主要这个有急用，非常不好意思的！