题目： Somebody thinks job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others hold the opposite view: job permanent is much more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 一些人认为工作满足感比工作稳定性更重要，而另一些人认为人们不能总是期望享受工作，一份稳定的工作才是更重要的。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。 7分： 1.固定工作可以满足员工的基本生活需求。因为没有人可以逃离现实。每天我们要面临各种各样的开销。相对稳定的工作可以支付这些开销。另外长期在一个公司更容易蝴蝶晋升因为他们对公司忠诚。 2.那些提倡追寻他们喜欢工作的人把工作的满意度当成选择工作的首要条件。他们认为只有和友好的同事和灵活的工作时间下工作才能激发他们的潜能更好的完成工作任务。 3.我认为世界上没有完美的工作，我们能做的就是找一个相对合适的工作。没有多年的努力和坚持很难获得职业安全感。 范文赏析： 首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场 Alarmingly, various stories concerning crimes have been pushing into spotlight. Conflicting ideas clash in finding out the root causes of misdeeds. My stand is that external reasons have a bigger influence on those misconducts. Nobody is born to be a criminal. 点评：淡化模板;观点鲜明。 解析： 1. various stories 公众新闻报道 2. concerning 关于 3. have been pushing into spotlight …… 成为关注的焦点 4. conflicting ideas clash in …… 矛盾的观点在……方面互相碰撞 解析：clash v碰撞 二段：正方三个观点的展开： My arguments could be easily explored. One contributing factor triggering manifold malefactions could be owed to the external circumstances in which the one is raised. To put in details, in some poverty-stricken or violent families, children are usually not properly taken care of and they stand few chances of receiving fine education, it is likely that such children may easily be led astray and even worse, they may conduct some anti-social offences. Still, *** ographic or otherwise vulgar forms of media, have a really adverse impact on the young because the young can, in most cases, find it rather difficult to make positive choices about the types of influences in their lives, thus，it is possible for them to turn to a life of crime. Last, many perilous products that could be harnessed mit crimes are very easily and cheaply available to the youths. In fact, guns are sold in a number of stores in some countries. This fact alone makes it very easy for some people to embark on the criminal road. 三段：反方二个观点的展开 Granted, some people might remain suspicious of my stand and believe that those perpetrators are born to be evil. Some people argue that habitual malefaction is the main root cause of high crime rate. As for those felons such as gangsters boss or professional blackguards, to break the law is to take revenge on the society which they think unfair. Besides, some people contend that such is human nature to be greedy, selfish and jealous, which accounts for many types of crimes. It is also found that some women mit economic crimes simply because they are more vain and avaricious than others. 解析： 1. habitual malefaction 惯性犯罪 2. felons 重罪人 3. gangsters boss or professional blackguards 黑帮大哥和职业流氓 4. take revenge on the society which they think unfair 报复认为不公平的社会 5. vain and avaricious 虚荣的贪婪的 尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由 In a nutshell, I re-affirm my stand that different crimes could be bination of various elements, however, in parison with evil nature, external factors actually play a profound influence in leading some immature or inexperienced people to go astray. 7分： 1.如果一个工作紧紧可以稳定我们的生活确保我们的衣食住行，那仅仅是谋生。如果有些东西可以促使我们有无尽的 *** ，一定是我们执着追求的事业。以自己的故事为例，讲述自己曾经有个稳定的工作但是总是感觉生活空虚后来选择了开始创业。所以成功应该是我们事业的选择和自己兴趣的结合。 2.很多人认为如果频繁的换工作盲目的追求不显示的梦想会陷入经济困难。还有一种说法一个稳定的工作会找到完美的伴侣，传统观点看年轻人有稳定的工作更容易赢得他们伴侣的青睐。 The proportion of people’s life spent working is very high，hence，feelings about one's job must mirror how an individual feels about his or her life, in this sense, job satisfaction is indeed important for people’s well-being. One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their desirable careers. The connotation of ideal job never fails to sparkle people’s heated debate. Personally speaking, a career that brings us the minimum sense of fulfillment is superior to a stable job. For a start，if a job can simply stabilize our lives and ensure our acmodations, it is simply a means of earning a living. By contrast, if there is anything that can stimulate our endless passion, tap our unlimited potentials and enhance our happiness index, it must the career that we have a burning desire to undertake. Also, the debate reminds me of myself, I am now embarking on self-employment. Five years ago, I had a seemingly stable job, namely, a civil servant, more freedom and meager salary is the feature of my job. However, my life always felt empty and I was fed up with my former job. After careful consideration, I hardened my heart to carve out my own career. Of course, the process is tough, however, I live my life to the full, I always get my hands full and have limited free time at my own disposal. Luckily enough, my sense of happiness and contentment gradually grows on me. Therefore, it is a success that if we can bine our career options with personal interests. As a proverb goes, one’s meat is another man’s poison. Others, however, might remain suspicious of my stand. Some people argue that it is also possible that one falls into financial difficulties if skipping beeen jobs too frequently or blindly pursue unrealistic dreams. Another argument hold by some people is that a stable job indicates the odds of finding ideal partner of life, seen from the traditional perspective, a young *** who enjoys stable job stands more chances of wining the heart of his or her new date. To sum up, my stand is that more and more modern people can no longer be dependent nor want to be dependent on a single career. In parison with stable job, choosing the careers that our hearts desire deserves more praises. 6.5分： 1.一些人认为职业满意度比职业安全感更重要。理由是如果人们对工作很满意就自然会有热情去做，反过来会有更出色的表现。 2.我认为工作不总是很有趣并且长久的事业感一直很重要，比如一个产品经理想要取得成功必须要了解各种客户的需求。一个更有力的说明是科学家想要确定太阳黑子的周期。需要花费他毕生的时间去观察和记录数据。如果没有持久辛苦付出是不会尝到成功的滋味。 A job can provide people with various things including pay, perks, and reputation. But if one thinks about the significance or at very least the purpose of doing the job, he/she must really consider the relative importance beeen job satisfaction and job stability. Some believe that the sense of satisfaction oueighs that of security in the workplace. The reason is that if people are satisfied with their job, they will naturally have more zest for what they do, and this can in turn motivate them to achieve better job performance. By parison, although a high level of job security suggests that people can keep their jobs, those who value it more would have less incentive to work hard, and thus be less likely to reach parable achievements. However, I personally would agree with the view that jobs are not always enjoyable and a constant career bear more importance. For instance, if a product manager wants to succeed, he/she will have to study the varying preferences of consumers before launching any potentially popular product. A more convincing example is the scientists who identified the cycle of sunspot. He spent his entire life in an observatory tracking and recording the astronomical data. None of these works are pleasant things to do, but without such continuous painstaking work in an occupation, people will be unable to taste the thrill of success, and can even end up leading a fruitless life. In conclusion, my own view is that job satisfaction is more important than job security, but to acplish any meaningful goals, one must go through the repetition of endless boring work. 6分： 1.固定工作可以满足员工的基本生活需求。因为没有人可以逃离现实。每天我们要面临各种各样的开销。相对稳定的工作可以支付这些开销。另外长期在一个公司更容易晋升因为他们对公司忠诚。 2.那些提倡追寻他们喜欢工作的人把工作的满意度当成选择工作的首要条件。他们认为只有和友好的同事和灵活的工作时间下工作才能激发他们的潜能更好的完成工作任务。 3.我认为世界上没有完美的工作，我们能做的就是找一个相对合适的工作。没有多年的努力和坚持很难获得职业安全感。 It is true that seeking a decent job is not as easy as decades ago due to the economic recession and petitive job market. In this circumstance, although some believe individuals cannot always enjoy their own jobs and seeking a permanent job is necessary: others still insist that a sense of satisfaction toward job is crucial. The different opinions would be discussed in the following essay. On the one hand, a permanent job can guarantee employee’s basic needs: so its importance should not be ignored . This is because almost no one can escape from the reality. Everyday, people are facing with a variety of expenses: such as food shelter, transport and even education tuition for children. With a relatively stable job: citizens: especially those in middle aged can cover most expenses. In addition, those who stay in the same pany or institution are more likely to get a promotion as they show the loyalty towards their panies. By contrast, those who change their jobs frequently may meet unintended outes. For example, they may find it difficult to support themselves and raise their family members. On the other hand, those advocates for pursuing a job they love might regard job satisfaction as the priority when finding an employment. They believe only working with friendly colleagues and employers and under a flexible working time schedule, can they fulfill their potential and acplish all tasks well, tins idea is unrealistic. For example, dozens of young graduates have the bitter result because of their immature thoughts - that is to say unemployment. In my opinion: people having an important job are more likely to have a promising job career and wellbeing. There is no perfect job in the world and therefore the only thing people can do is to find a suitable job rather than a perfect one. 你好！ 同问。。。 如有疑问，请追问。